This Only Goes To Show...

[Lizman]

That Most People Will Ignore A Verse Due To Its Lack Of Visual Cues.
So To All The People Who Jokingly Said That They're All About Symbols...


Check This Battle Out

http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_details.php?section=tb&id=451707

[CulpritT]

Yo wtf you even talking about? i used to wonder why people hated on you so much, but now i realize its because youre a nonsensical rambling faggot, stfu


Edit: you prolly cant see this cuz you had me blocked for some reason but damn nigga is you gay?

[Lizman]

Without Swaying, Could You Voice Your Opinion About My Ending Punch In Comparison With Any Punch My Opponent Made? Not Even Only My Ending Punch, Any Comment To My Credit Card Scheme And Or Cat Scheme In Comparison To My Opponent?

[Letum]

[Fail] Lizman verse- YouTube

[CulpritT]

LMAO!

[Lizman]

Hm.
I'll Vent When The Battle's Over.
See People I Can Be Even When I Don't Seem Man.

[Phroxen]

Without Swaying, Could You Voice Your Opinion About My Ending Punch In Comparison With Any Punch My Opponent Made? Not Even Only My Ending Punch, Any Comment To My Credit Card Scheme And Or Cat Scheme In Comparison To My Opponent?

Sure, I'll humor you.


I've Got BOAT LOADS ON DECK, COLD SOLES IN CRACKS That Leave Him A Freight From THOSE HOLES ON BACKS, Boot, Legging, Cause When I GO HOLDING BACK I'll POP CAP That'll Get TOP WRAPPED Like SNOW GLOBES AND HATS!!

You're trying to make references to freight moving.. (Boat Loads, A Freight, Bootlegging). But, the setups are horrible. They're actually nonexistent. You've got boat loads on deck? Of what?? Cold soles in cracks.. you've got cold feet?? That leave him a freight.. literal translation: you'll either turn him into or give him freight.. (note: a freight does not sound like afraid. Those holes on backs is broken english and sounds retarded. Boot, Legging besides the homophonic tie to "bootlegging" adds nothing to the bar. Then you said when I go holding back.. more broken english because again, that doesn't make sense. You can either hold back or not hold back.. there is no such thing as go holding back. Then you say I'll pop cat that'll get top wrapped.. pop cat? Another floating fragment. Get top wrapped? Again.. not only a weird fragment, but wtf is getting top wrapped? Also, snow globes have nothing to do with your entire bar besides fitting into a rhyme scheme, which is called forcing multis.


Its Like BOLD CODES ON CHECKS When I Stomp This Type Out And Charge Him With Whats Left, Right When The FOFOS BEEN FLEXED, The Fee Line Aint Paid So When I Feed Ion With Strays, I Rid Pussy Tip To Dump It All Over Like OLD HOMES WITH CATS!!

When I stomp this type out and charge him with what's left.. is a horribly forced setup. You can tell you had a credit card / check concept brewing, but your setup is just a big explanation of what you're attempting to portray, in an awkwardly worded jumble. Fee Line / Feline could have been dope if it had any setup at all. It was just thrown in the dust to attempt to connect your next idea with cats but it didn't work. Also, Feed Ion isn't wordplay. Ion does not sound like Iron, as you're assuming it does. Not only that, but the double meaning, if you force it to make sense, is still in broken english. Feed Iron with Strays. Say that aloud and lose your G-card instantly.

COLTS GROPED FOR TESTS, No, For My Aims He'll Get SCOPED CLOSE WITH TECHS, The Points To Exhibit If He Was LONE SO CHOSE DEATH, NOT PRONE TO SEX Cause Only Time Anyone Offered His D Tails Was When They're PROPOSING SPECS!!!

Aim/Scope... blah. Lone so chose death / Not prone to sex.. the first multi emphasizes the wrong syllable, has the wrong "O" sound in two different places.. and the next multi is missing the first rhyming syllable. Not does not rhyme with colts, close, etc.. The last punch (D Tails / details) was decent but was a bit awkwardly worded, and too simple to hold any weight.




TLDR; Less broken english, More creative ideas.

Oh, & @Unyque LMMFAOOOOOOOOOOO. That clip is fucking brilliant.

[Phroxen]

Danke Jason. I respect those that appreciate the truth.

[Lizman]

Sure, I'll humor you.




You're trying to make references to freight moving.. (Boat Loads, A Freight, Bootlegging). But, the setups are horrible. They're actually nonexistent. You've got boat loads on deck? Of what?? Cold soles in cracks.. you've got cold feet?? That leave him a freight.. literal translation: you'll either turn him into or give him freight.. (note: a freight does not sound like afraid. Those holes on backs is broken english and sounds retarded. Boot, Legging besides the homophonic tie to "bootlegging" adds nothing to the bar. Then you said when I go holding back.. more broken english because again, that doesn't make sense. You can either hold back or not hold back.. there is no such thing as go holding back. Then you say I'll pop cat that'll get top wrapped.. pop cat? Another floating fragment. Get top wrapped? Again.. not only a weird fragment, but wtf is getting top wrapped? Also, snow globes have nothing to do with your entire bar besides fitting into a rhyme scheme, which is called forcing multis.

TLDR; Less broken english, More creative ideas.

Oh, & @Unyque LMMFAOOOOOOOOOOO. That clip is fucking brilliant.

-____- Seriously Phroxen? Seriously?
First You Attempt To Explain My Concept Then You Ask Me What Concept Is Behind My Verse That You JUST Explained... You Are A Moron.
And A Freight Does Sound Like Afraid.

---------- Post added at 02:57 AM ---------- Previous post was at 02:55 AM ----------

Phroxen is a voting guru man straight up.. this guy is on point as fuck

upped your VP and told someone to give you an FVC title

one of the only guys who really deserve it

:(
Ah Jason.

[Lizman]

http://www.dict.cc/?s=afraid
http://www.dict.cc/?s=freight

Argument Destroyed.
And I Get To The Rest Of The Highly Unlikely Wrong Accusations After The Battle. Ah Btw, My See People Comment Had 5 Plays In It But I Guess You Cant See It Unless I Provide You With Visual Cues. Which I Knew To Begin With.