YO CHECK DIS SHYT OUT!!!!!!!! HOT JOINT FROM BIGBEN

[Ghambit]

dis song is like 6 months old,but have a listen and feedback plz...thanx

Lets Beef Track: top of the world - By: BIGBEN

[J u s T C]

This isn't bad man, I wasn't expecting much when I clicked the thread. quality aside and a few little niggles this was nice. just gotta polish up your flow a little, tighten it up. I hear you doubling your verse. lower those doubles down a little to make your vocals sound more natural. rehearse your bars and get a bit more familiar with them before you drop because there were parts where you lose your emotion and flow. Keep it up.