On Going Metaphor Scheme

[Fredo Lombardi]

I'm really feeling that style man and think its dope I only can write about four bars before it starts sounding dumb. I know the scheme itself is not hard to write but its
hard to make it sound hot and not forced can anyone give me some tips?

---------- Post added at 11:47 AM ---------- Previous post was at 11:08 AM ----------

Damn no one can help me with this? Just C Fiji Osa Phil Banks where the fuck yall fags at man?

[Phroxen]

wtf are you talking about.. please don't tell me you mean that wack word association shit they use in URL.

[Revan]

wtf are you talking about.. please don't tell me you mean that wack word association shit they use in URL.

I think thats what he means... :(

[Fredo Lombardi]

wtf are you talking about.. please don't tell me you mean that wack word association shit they use in URL.

That scheme has been used way before rappers started using it its a form of poetry

---------- Post added at 12:19 PM ---------- Previous post was at 12:17 PM ----------

RULE that couldn't hurt your bars either man I seen your shit

[Revan]

thanks for the advice fam, maybe i'll be able to win some battles now.

[Fredo Lombardi]

Yeah stop rapping with the fake accent and stop doing the failed punches

[Revan]

well shucks thanks again cory!

[Fredo Lombardi]

Anytime