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-FlowCab
05-26-2012, 06:29 AM
http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_details.php?section=lb&id=571886

I need a crew, I'll let you be the judge. ^^

Phil Banks
05-26-2012, 01:10 PM
need to work on your delivery with the writtens.... got some cool concepts couple lines i liked somewhat.... keep battling you'll get better the more you write as far as crews... they'll hit u up once u make a lil noise

-FlowCab
05-26-2012, 01:52 PM
thanks ill keep doing work. just gettin the hang of things

✍FoeCoe™
05-26-2012, 04:37 PM
not enough hard hitting punches & metaphors arent really connecting,

-FlowCab
05-26-2012, 04:42 PM
why are you talking about what i need to do.. when i've beatin you like 4 times this week, no hate just don't see how you could help me lol, by repeating what dude said above you? lol.

Phil Banks
05-26-2012, 07:23 PM
nah some of ya metaphors are worded weird... hard to really tell u what i don't like main thing was delivery after your fart line u got a lil less potent with it before that u was doing it... i dunno if u need any help get at me though

✍FoeCoe™
05-29-2012, 01:21 PM
...Err body know that I wasn't even trying on to battlez... lilwayne voice , lil b voice , and Bnas voice... i waz just bored so I posted random shit..... and u still sucked you can't write fo shit ur style is weak and u should just quit rapping 4real