Topical Recitations

[Dono]

Newest work will be at the bottom of the thread from now on.


Anatomy of Murder (Spoken Word) - YouTube

Sad Songs (Spoken Word) - YouTube

Robbery - Hastily Taken (Spoken Word) - YouTube

Shark Weak (Spoken Word) - YouTube

Yo V, this time don't shit on my thread :(

There's nowhere else to really post this, or at least get at me and tell me where it SHOULD go, but it's not like anything is really going on in here anyway :/

Riches to Rags (Acapella/Spoken Word) - YouTube

[Dono]

A Bird's Perspective (Acapella) - YouTube

[Dono]

Shark Weak added to top.

[RhetoriK]

Shark week was great. If your could translate that staccato in all aspects of audio, you'd have a toolkit that not too many people have.

Kind of remind me of the early Anticon styled era but with better structure and penmanship. My only qualm is that the tone kind of drones through it.

Possibly switch up cadence each stanza on your next piece. Your inflection is MUCH better. Now its time to hit from different angles rhythmically. Like, The listener needs to be taken by suprise with each bar, so your pre-recording mindset shot include discerning wheter or not your point of impact is going to be lyrical or delivery.

Thats how these new guys are so passable in the mainstream. We hear their lyrics and wonder what the deal is, but the deliveries are whats getting them over most of the time. You have a tight pen game. Packaged that with a tight line for line arsenal of deliveries and cadences and youre in there.

Eyedea is a great example of that. In "Now" he throws a kitchen sink of looks from the delivery standpoint and its so subtle its hard to even notice.

Keep up the goid work. I dont get to chat as often as I did but I'm watching. Ups.

[SoupErb]

Ayo, who the fuck?... I mean, I know who you are.. But how come I never heard this?

This is nice man. Alotta meaning behind great vocabulary.

RhetoriK basically summed it up for me.

But yo I wanna hear more.. Especially over a beat.

[Dono]

Thanks for the feedback guys, I'll keep working at it.

Added: Robbery - Hastily Taken

[Phoenix]

Listen to all. It's dope shit you already know fam.

[Dono]

Thanks for the listens, I appreciate it.

Added: Sad songs

[Dono]

Added: Anatomy of Murder

[Dono]

Dragon Blood - (Spoken Word) - YouTube

[Dono]

If I Ruled the World (Spoken Word - Full Version) - YouTube

[Dono]

Mining Pearl Harbor (Spoken Word) - YouTube

[Dono]

Defiant Gaze (Spoken Word) - YouTube

[Dono]

The Mountain Godess (Spoken Word) - YouTube

[Dono]

Lake of Tears (Spoken Word) - YouTube

[Dono]

Helicopter Blades (Spoken Word) - YouTube

[Dono]

Stream Of Consequence (Spoken Word) - YouTube

[Dono]

Garden of Eden (Spoken Word) - YouTube

[Dono]

Stranger in a Familiar Place (Spoken Word) - YouTube

[Dono]

Family Inheritance (Spoken Word) - YouTube

[Dono]

Against One's Will (Spoken Word) - YouTube

[CCPBeats]

Yo Shark Week Was Pretty Ill!

[Jack Swagger]

Against One's Will (Spoken Word) - YouTube (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DQ-WuI24-68)

That was dope.
Still gunning for ya.

[Dono]

How Aiden Was Lost (Spoken Word) - YouTube

[Dono]

Color Blind (Spoken Word) - YouTube

[Dono]

Standing Lies (Spoken Word) - YouTube

[Dono]

Mind of a Serial Killer (Spoken Word) - YouTube

[Dono]

Golden Goddess (Spoken Word) - YouTube

[Dono]

Door Wide Open (Spoken Word) - YouTube

[Dono]

Bored To Death (Explicit - Spoken Word) - YouTube

[Dono]

The Beast (Spoken Word - Throwback) - YouTube

[Dono]

The Runner (Spoken Word) - YouTube

[Dono]

Psychography (Spoken Word) - YouTube

[Dono]

Face The Music (Spoken Word) - YouTube

[Dono]

President's Daughter (Spoken Word) - YouTube

[Dono]

Master Plan (Spoken Word) - YouTube

[Dono]

Inception (Spoken Word) - YouTube

[Dono]

Primitive Anaesthesia (Spoken Word) - YouTube

[JayDiamondScarFace]

Some good shitt,,alotta music videos nothing big,famous actors,YouTube video links nothing major artistt waz expecting more or better links two some maybe rappers hype man,