This life- Alter Ego

[Alter Ego1718]

whats up, new to the site just droppin one of my most recent tracks , on some real shit. let me know what yall think

http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=11611131

[Phonocide]

Pretty nice, fam. One thing I noticed is that your flow gets a little choppy when you have to squeeze extra syllables in. Instead of forcing those out, become familiar with the concept of "triplets" and that should help you roll those fuckers out more smoothly. Aside from that, it's not bad at all.

7.5/10 - Good shit, but keep puttin' in that work!

[Alter Ego1718]

K thx ,,I know a few people said that what do you mean by triplets? Ya I'm tryin only got limited time to fuck wit my music. N I do every part of it except the beat,, anything else?