Fiji Osa vs Intricate Skillz

[IV]

Fiji Osa (http://www.letsbeef.com/forums/member.php?u=879324)vs Intricate Skillz (http://www.letsbeef.com/forums/member.php?u=879213)


House rules apply. Any questions, contact me.

Check ins are due Thursday (March 1st) at 11.59PM EST
Verses are due Saturday (March 3rd) at 11.59PM EST

Line length; 20-60 lines
3-0 K.O or first to 5 votes

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Emotion
Imagery
Poetic Techniques
Ending

[ozark]

CheckIn in- imma go head n be a good sport n say gl dude-

[Fiji Osa]

Checkin In - Fuck Being Nice Don't Disappoint

[ozark]

Dont get somebody else to write ya fuckin topical!

[IV]

You both have until tomorrow.

[Fiji Osa]

I'll be Posting Tonight Verity & Intricate Skillz

[Fiji Osa]

Verity & Intricate Skillz Posted



In the unveiling of the TRUE METHODIST this revelation ushered in the final chapter of the NEW TESTAMENT .. before Christ and Spirit there stood a pale horse and it's rider was hell's source. The screams of the Legions echoed through the heavenly regions as three broken seals revealed that ..

According to a Chinese philosophy
They were two primal forces .. an ill-fated prophecy
And that quality is constantly what continues to plague me subconsciously
Honestly .. Your God cursed this symbiotic infusion
Anger and torment was just their single inclusion
And thru all's delusion
The "Power of Darkness" on the wall .. covets the illusion
That lustful bliss was their only seclusion .. their convenient profusion
His sheer dominance haunted her
Confidence wanted her as both braced for something wonderful
Yet, Yin seduced Yang .. It seems even the "Tempter" is vulnerable
If "he" is fire then "She" is the Earth
Yang symbolizes abortions whereas Yin was my birth
"he" is dammed and She was holy - but what you should find so scary
Yang is Beelzebub and Yin is my mother Mary
What was the reason that she was needed this season?
Perhaps, because she was portrayed as the tree in the garden of EDEN
"he" contemplated suckling the juices out her forbidden fruit
Her core dripping, in truth .. Mary molested herself in front of the urns of decay
but then turns away aroused how "he" waits in agony for his turn to play
Yang's curiosity overwhelms him to the point that "he" stands blind
For "he" knows, to rape her innocence will be a grande fine
My mother is WOMAN and is both bringer and destroyer of all mankind
But competing with her Vanity is like Pluto competing with the sun
For the center of the galaxy
They ventured into alchemy, concocting a mixture of divine blasphemy
She held herself tight as her chastity is crucified most elaborately
"RAVAGE ME AGAIN"!! but this time more savagely, AMEN ..
Speaking in tongues she straddled 'little horn" before the throne of God, forever mixing the tribal ages
as he inserted her from behind her teeth was ripping the bible pages
Blood steamed down and covered the alter
For she was a virgin not even touched by God the Father
"Immaculate Conception" why bother and continued to thrust harder
as he climaxed she said "Thou Father who art in Hell, I swallow in thy pain
for hollowed be thy name for the spawn of this vane will expose your enemy's shame"

And "Death" was my midwife I was born still life even as ma neck was cut the sensation was surreal like .. if my Father was sadistic and my mother was a whore than for ma brother what I'll have in store will sure to bring about the third APOCALYPSE.

[Fiji Osa]

Verity & Intricate Skillz .. It's Exactly 12:01

I waited So He Wouldn't Have An Excuse .. I Win By No Show .. Don't Come Bitchin For a Rematch You Had More Than Enuff Time To Post Faggot .. You Would Have Loss Anyway

[IV]

Fiji Osa let him post. No-show battles get deleted and they won't count towards a W on your record and your verse will be wasted.

24 hour extension if Skillz doesn't show it will be deleted

[Fiji Osa]

It'z Just About Over For His Extension .. Verity idgf Delete This Shit His Fault For Ducking Or Close It and Put It In THe Archives ..