View Full Version : Krhyme Killz ft Jack-0-Lantern Feedback?
I would really like some feedback on my verse. Lol.
Again, I did no editing, that's just a raw set of vocals.
Broken link, one minute.
fixed link:
http://hulkshare.com/9fr7lhcvfsy7/1997_feat_Jack.mp3
Catharsis
02-05-2012, 01:10 PM
100 percent honesty.... the lyrics weren't bad but no KO punches in there. And dude your presence on the mic is so stiff and uncomfortable... work on sounding less conversational.
Thanks for the feedback, keep it coming.
Lizman
02-05-2012, 01:18 PM
Intro Is Annoying And Wrongly Executed. Krhyme Kills Is Good. Jack Couldn't Keep Up With Him Although He'd Be Able To If He Stops Trying To Copy K's Style
Krhyme Killz
02-05-2012, 01:52 PM
ummm...i'll take feedback too lol..
nah...the intro shit was all me...something imma start doing for my city..
as far as your verse Jack...shit was pretty good man. try to use the 'normalize' feature when you do mix it down. that way you can lower the difference in the loud peaks and the low parts. i felt like you had some good material, and the flow was pretty much there...seemed a slight bit hesitant though. i fux with the vibe on here forreal...this is totally my style so i can appreciate that it may not be as easy for you to just pick up the baton...i thought you handled it well...its def going on the LB Kollab mini mixtape..good shit Jack
I had most of that verse already written to another verse, and thought it fit this just as well, glad you dug it, K.
Lizman
02-05-2012, 01:58 PM
Last Try...Since That Is My Style Too (My 'Training Beats' Are All From Premier)
You Wanna Do A Collabo For My Upcoming EP Called Skydivers?
Krhyme Killz
02-05-2012, 02:00 PM
you got it Liz
Revan
02-05-2012, 02:06 PM
Mixing issues aside i thought both were exceptional here.
Lizman
02-05-2012, 02:14 PM
Peciated Killz
I Suppose I Didn't Look At The Outweighing Positives
Both Came Nice And I Suppose Even A Bad Jack Verse Is Still Good
Krhyme Killz
02-05-2012, 08:49 PM
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STEELO
Just C
-Dimez-
Askari
AfterThought
MurderousSwag
Doc T
2FUEL
SWAVY
02-06-2012, 02:30 AM
100 percent honesty.... the lyrics weren't bad but no KO punches in there. And dude your presence on the mic is so stiff and uncomfortable... work on sounding less conversational.
CO-SIGN you gotta add some swag in it...da bars was nice but dey wulda came out smoother if it wasnt spit so proper...loosen up a lil play wit it...and killz sounds like Raekwon on dat track
Hmmm. I'll take that into consideration.
Doc T
02-07-2012, 03:00 AM
FIRST OFF BEAT WAS BUMPIN MADD FRESH KILLZ JUMPED OF REAL NICE, NEEDS A BIT OF WORK ON THE QUALITY, BUT ALL OUT THE MULTIS N PUNCHES HIT HARD AS FUCK DOPE SWAG WIT THA DELIVERY! JACK JUMPED IN DOPE ALSO BUT WAS A BIT LOW OFF THE JUMP IDA TURNED IT UP A NOTCH BUT FLOW WENT IN REAL NICE DELIVERY WAS SMOOTH MULTIS DIDNT MATCH VERSE 1 BUT STILL MADE AN IMPACT THAT WAS FAR FROM UNNOTICED! OVERALL ID RATE IT A 9 DUE TO QUALITY N VOLUME! NICE TRACK FELLAZ I REALLY LIKED THE BEAT IT WAS FUNKY FRESH!
BE SURE TO CHECK OUT THE ALBUM LEAK FT MY WIFE AND DROP YOUR THOUGHTZ/FEEDBACK WIT A RATE, IT WOULD BE GREATLY APPRECIATED FELLAZ
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