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Phroxen
02-03-2012, 01:47 AM
Yooooooooo.
/discuss
B U R D E N
02-03-2012, 01:58 AM
Props+ i listened a few times and thought it was tight
imo you started good but not as strong as you finished.. thats all good though.
i noticed in a few spots it sounds like you're catching your breath which i understand but that would be one thing i'd say you should work on a little bit nah mean.
Work on your breath control, as well as your timing, it can be off in a few spots, but I can understand trying to pack so many multies into a bar. This wasn't a bad track, though. A little short.
I'll break this down a little more shortly.
Phroxen
02-03-2012, 12:02 PM
Thanks for the feed so far. Keep it coming..
Óðinn
02-03-2012, 12:08 PM
i actually enjoyed this, good shit dude, nice use of multis.. think in one or two parts ya were trying to rush a few pieces... got some mice skill on the mic tho, keep at it... :high:
The awesome range of vocab made this track, i think the 'rushed flow' actually gave it quite a nice effect, whole thing was dope and entertaining over all good shit
Phroxen
02-03-2012, 09:25 PM
Bump .
Phroxen
02-04-2012, 08:15 PM
Bump .
RhetoriK
02-04-2012, 11:25 PM
Yeah, I'm all about this. I'm personally tired of THAT beat but you made it enjoyable man. You kinda got ahead of youself on the faster executions, but shit..solid all around. Ups!
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