The Almighty Vs. Ill Phenom (Ill Phenom Wins)

[SandMan]

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[Phracture]

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[Ill Phenom]

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[Ill Phenom]

100 Yard Dash

The *Whistle Blows* We take off full force sprinting around the track
These Little Toes getting Coarse Hinting a Downwards Act
Thighs Begin to Tingle, Heat Dwells As The Sun Churns Thru The Skies
Sweat Starts to Trinkle and Wreak Hell As It Burns Thru My Eyes
My opponents? Passing Em Pronto But the lead I actually Follow
Getting Real Tired and Weak, Gasp And Breath, and Actively Swallow
Heart Beats Like African Congo's Smacking the Bongo
Reached the Halfway Line, Dividing Me From Point A To B ÷
But Subtracting My Energy, While Multiplying the Space I Need
Pickin it up, Passing Em Cleverly, Adding the Pace and Speed
But in Actual Jeopardy, Legs Getting Numb, Feel like Pistorius, Here In This Round
Hoping that Mathematical Sensory Equals Victorious Cheers From The Crowd!
Lead Stretching Shut, I have to take it, A Swift Bravado As I Try N Move Quickened
Edging up On the Last Few Footsteps Like the Gist of Apollo's Final Moon Mission
Toe a couple Inches Ahead Now. "Man I Sprint My Anus Off In This Pivotal Time"
Trophy Is Mine, As I put My "Soul Down", Left a Print Greatness On This Finishing Line

[Phracture]

Marathon Memior

Gun Shots Sound Off , Foot Pounds Ground Floors
This'll Determine Who Wants The Crown More
Feeling Like A Modern Day Flash, Agility Gaining
Seems As Everyone Passed. My Abilities Patience
Limbs Uncontrollable , My Moving Compare to Bicycle Tires
While Theyre Stamina Wont Replenish n They're Bicycle Tired.
Everything Is A Total Blur I Jus Seen a Crossing Goal
A Couple Running Up , But Keep Up At A Enormous Flow
Pace Wont Go Matrix On me , Cant Compare to A Basic Homie
Remember Times at the Stable Racing Ponys
I Wont Stop !!! Almost at the Destination Of Victory,
The Champagne Rain , They Let the Liquor Re-Bathe You
We Neck n Neck , But theres a Bunch Of Voice I Recollect
About How Ima Strive to Win and Earn the Best Respect
Im Inches Away From the Finish. It Seems So Magically
How I Was A Second To Late & He Passes Me

[UnEtHıCaL]

Rhyming Scheme/Flow - Ill Phenom. There was no flaws with Almighty, but Phenom added the internals and just had a more elevated scheme.
Vocabulary - Ill Phenom. Almighty was basic enough whilst Phenom stormed the cat. A little more elevation in it and you'll have it locked.
Topic/Meaning - Ill Phenom. Almighty took it very literally, and as Phenom has the same topic, I felt that his was more of an inspirational targeted peice instead of a story, like an example of determination, so he takes the cat.
Storytelling/Progression - Ill Phenom. So easy to do this cat with this topic. I felt that Phenom added a middle to the track, whilst Almighty was start and finish.
Emotion - Ill Phenom. We never got to see the distraught of Almighty's protagonist, while Phenom's had elements of fear of losing and the ending showed relief.
Imagery - Ill Phenom. Very close cat, but I think the metaphors in Phenom's emotions toppled it to him.
Poetic Techniques - Ill Phenom. The internal rhyming and sounds and the scattered metaphors snatches it.
Ending - Almighty. Nothing really happened at the end of Phenom's. He is winning the whole way through, and wins. Almighty's has a twist, although predictable, so he takes it.

GMV// Ill Phenom. Dope topical guys. IL's going to be a problem in this tournament, and based from his elevation from the last piece to this one, Almighty could do it by the tournament too with the experience he's picking up.