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Danny TannerDanny Tanner is on FIRE! 10+ wins in a row!Danny Tanner is on FIRE! 10+ wins in a row! (100%) WINNER
Ranked #16 This Month (#1125 All Time)
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Reppin: California, United States
Flow tagious (0%)
Ranked #31 This Month (#5629 All Time)
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Reppin: Yuba City, California, United States



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Battle started: June 13th at 14:30
Challenger joined: June 13th at 16:43


Voting has ended for this battle (battle finished on 2019-06-13 16:43:49).

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I have Danny taking this by a clear margin. His bars were better developed, his verse flowed better, and his structure was levels ahead of FT's. I would caution you (Danny) about the longer schemes. Being too complex can hurt you in certain instances. That opening scheme was a little bit stretched out. Fair is in.

Voted: Danny Tanner: 6 / Flow tagious: 3
Posted on: 2019-06-14 02:05:11 Private Message Sean Griffey


This was a clear win for Danny, and he was ahead in every aspect by a long way. That being said, Flow tagious has clearly got some potential.

Danny, obviously using such a long scheme was quite a challenge but you handled it really well and came out with a great verse as a result. There were a couple of issues though. Initially I felt the scheming was a bit inconsistent as far as stressing of syllables and cadence, although having gone through it a few more times I think I'm wrong. The pirate bar was so out of the blue it almost made me laugh out loud, so although I don't think the syllabe-stress works both ways it's probably botb. Your closer was funny too, although I genuinely have no idea what "lick in the win, doe?" actually means and unless there's something I don't get the wording was very forced.

Flow tagious your verse wasn't bad but it was missing two key aspects which you need to have a chance of winning. One of these is punchlines, there are many guides on how to write them in the forums so I suggest you look there. The other is multies. Most of your lines had two-syllable rhymes (i.e. denim/venom) which is a good start. However, instead of having heaps of really short rhymes, try having fewer, longer rhymes (at least 3 or 4 syllables for every rhyme is something to aim for) and capitalising the rhyming syllables like THIS so they're more apparent to voters.

Good battle!

Voted: Danny Tanner: 7 / Flow tagious: 3
Posted on: 2019-06-14 02:15:47 Private Message Kiwi Peewee


HVK

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WASNT TOO HOT ON DANNYS LONG RHYME SCHEME TBH BUT THA CONCEPTS WERE OK, THA ''WIN DOE'' WP IS NOT THAT ORIGINAL BUT THA CLOSER STILL MADE ME CHUCKLE A LIL..... FLOW VERSE WAS OK AN EASY TO FOLLOW BUT YOU NEED TO BE MORE EXPERIMENTAL WITH YOUR RHYMES IN TEXT, YOU COULD TAKE A FEW POINTERS FROM DANNYS VERSE HERE...... DT TAKES THIS QUITE CONVINCINGLY, FAIR IS DROPPED!

Voted: Danny Tanner: 6 / Flow tagious: 3
Posted on: 2019-06-14 20:55:11 Private Message HVK


danny gets this just because he had the multis and was dissing his opponent while flow had mostly only self hype lines with really basic rhyme schemes.

Voted: Danny Tanner: 5 / Flow tagious: 3
Posted on: 2019-06-15 04:49:31 Private Message The Saaxxx Baba


Danny came harder with actual lines that made more sense and punch 

sorry flow, but u got flow tho 

Voted: Danny Tanner: 5 / Flow tagious: 4
Posted on: 2019-06-15 18:46:50 Private Message TooYoung

 

 
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