its all LoV Love....GL Bruh 

Damn... Crew on Crew violence? 

Expo: Diane was urkels mom name, yuck Hates voting text cause you have to "read....

Lol interesting...ya u too Blocc..FS

R2BA:

This a scary night for bro, as Vlad's SWORD GO KILLIN, got Dracula bitin dude w/ MORE GORE IN HIM, as I "tape him drinkin his blood" let the HORROR FILL'M!

The concept was there. THough it wasn't worked on enough nor executed to bring out its full potential. The wording of this bar was awkward and forced in places, example: Vlad's SWORD GO KILLIN... So..? Vlad's sword took it upon itself to go off on a murder spree? Killing at will... all by itself? Also this isn't a great set-up line for the concepts 'punchline'... next line: What does "with more gore in him"  mean? (i get what you were going for... but lets look at it from a basic writing pov)... These are the small thigns that will cost in big time in the long run. Try and make sure your bars are making sense, don't force a multi or set of words into a line cause it rhymes or kinda vaugely refers to the concept. Try multiple rhyme schemes, make sure the lines set up actually relates to its end multi/punchline and/or its overall end punch. 

In the Gaza ground, you'll be LEFT KILLED IN THERE, a victim among Palestinians so you'll be DEAD WITH IN THE SQUARE, you "die from Israeli Jet bombs" so DEATH IS IN THE AIR! 

All of this bar is very basic, fam. The wording is also awkward and forced. "in the Gaza ground you will be left killed in there" Terrible English.. Dead in the ground of Gaza (off top of head) reads smoother and cleaner. See what i mean? The punchline of this bar isn't a punch nor attacking Blocc... Should have scraped this one imo. 

Your'e like a reptile who AINT GOT LEGS OR ARMs, ur trying to "move sneakily" to MAKE YA TOWARD, but you cant "slither to me" to SNAKE YOUR WAY FORWARD! 

Three lines to call him a snake... a lot of filler and wasted space tbh, fam. The first multi doesn't rhyme with the following two either. Also, see: "make ya toward"... <read that... Stop forcing things to fit and make sense, write as if you would speak what is being written. 

You cant even "hop on a horse" on this PHONY's NUTS.."OUCH, ROY!", so "gitty out of here on da mule" n PONY UP COW BOY 

Not entierly sure where this one is trying to go but it has the same issues as the previous set of bars. 

Keep working at it. Remember to think "does this actually make sense beyond my own thoughts? Is this how it would be wrote in a book or how it would be said aloud?" If the answer is no... then its not right

Blocc:

how rich, thinking your rhymes are Catalytic CONVERTERS? no limit battles, make it priority to C-MURDER, got beef? You can get it seared like a CHESSEBURGER

Not sure what this bar is about tbh lol. Seems like three random lins put together...!? No real punch here, is just three lines of filler and a waste of space. 

it battles, make it priority to C-MURDER, got beef? You can get it seared like a CHESSEBURGER! Get in LoV as if you are a 'STEELN' WORKER, necro kind of creep-SEEING MURDER makes him become a TEAR'N'JERKER!

This is kinda similar to the first bar and you've used 'murder' as a multi again. Also the last multi reads awkward and what is a "tear and jerker"..? Think a bit of time spent messing around with different multi combinations may have worked well for you here. 

Just another SQUARE WORKER trying to invade ANOTHER CIRCLE, get this nerd, where's the MOTHER OF URKEL? time to 'die Ann' while preaching "the COLOR PURPLE!"

So far this is the only "attack" in your set of bars and it isn't really that strong tbh. I think i'm missing something with "the color purple" line? 

you lose to 'more men' as SCRIPTURE TYPE of COMPOSER, you hate to read, dyslexia, makes you a SLURRED AS YUCK, a PICTURE TYPE OF VOTER, "yer WORDS ALL SUCK!!"

Your best bar in the entire 8 haha. Little choppy on the read/smoothness of the read but its the best punch. 

Try focusing on one concept/punchline... then spend time thinking and write down multipl different set up lines. See which one fits best... then write the first line that will connect with this punchline you've not got. Don't force the multis, you can always change the rhyme scheme or even flip the set up line and the end multi around if it makes it flow better.... try different appraoches for your ideas. This seems like you rushed it and didn't really put much serious thought or effort into it. 

My winner had the harder hitting "punchline" out of the battle, my loser surprised me here, as he's usually better than this. 

Stay up, 1/

Rite was good up until death is in the air but fell off where blocc had some decent ideas but lacked the basics. Yall been around long enough to know the basics. This is an 8 so yall should be killing it but neither did. GL

fair vote no hate i went with the cheeseburger line i thought that was funny well done to both....