Venom of the red lotus

Interesting battle. I got KG winning this with more punches, although some of them didn't really make too much sense, imo (what does smuggling an L have to do with Prohibition?). Also if you're switching sides, that doesn't necessarily mean you're merging something, that only means you're flip-flopping lmao. Also saying shit like "bust the shotty to have his matter expanded" is awkward wording. I get what you're going for, but you're not gonna hear shit like that in everyday speech. Jizz is was the same kinda thing from you, to be honest. What do baseball swings and record spins have to do with your first being major? It feels like you're trying to connect two things together that have no correlation to them and reaching badly, as you do it. Also, DISS/DISK is not a good attempt at wordplay at all, bro. It felt like a lot of the same throughout the verse (sea food/see food was not only ungrammatical, but extremely played out, as well). JPOC 4 LYF!

VENOM of... DA JIZZZZZZZZZZZ

Lol dont feel like it needs an expo obviously KG won this all around fv 

Yo jizz just rhyme more words and relate your lines.better fvin

Yeah, this one is pretty clear cut. Like i mentioned in JM and g u t s, I don't like to see these verses get wasted against obvious troll verses by JM, so I'll give KG's shit a breakdown.

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How can ya THINK WHAT YA DID'S DOPE? You're 'bringing the bad quality' like PICS W/ A SHIT PHONE!

Nice short bar here. Simple, and a little bit basic. But, the execution is nice and clean KG. Good job.

Fucked his girl & told her I wouldn't FINISH IT QUICK THO, I'd 'take my time loading' like when LINKS ARE A BIT SLOW!

Hmm. I'm not sure if I would call having sex or reaching climax or anything like that "loading", but I got what you were going for. Not super clean and not my favourite line. Even if it did make sense, the whole slow internet/loading thing is pretty played. obviously this is a JM battle but ye.

Need 'something I can play with' so I'm aiming, W/ HIS HEAD IN LINE but when I 'let the shells burst?' It's not a KINDER EGG SURPRISE! 

I think this had potential to be a lot better. As it stands, it's not bad. But, I think it could have been presented better and with a more clever flip on the Kinder Egg thing. Something like you'll see the shells burst n toys come out like Kinder Egg. Decent stuff though.

If you're all about the 'backchat I'll start aBUSING THE BAD WORKER then put an 'end to the talk' w/o MUTING A CHAT SERVER! 

I mean you don't really put an end to the talk when you mute a server, if we're being technical. But again, this is a halfway decent line and of course I'm assuming you're going a bit lighter for a JM battle.

It'll be a 'clean kill, ' you was MURDERED IN YA BATHROOM! Stabbing this PERSON W/ A DAMN SPOON then BURNT HIM IN HIS DAD'S ROOM!

This is obviously filler, which is fine cos its a JM battle. I know that you know this type of line wouldn't fly in a legit battle so no qualms.

Overall I've got you with a mid-high six. Obviously you went light here so stuff was a bit basic and light. I would say that your execution is really good here and hopefully that translates to your other battles.