Good Luck G!

Weird science is an old movie. The kids create a woman on there computer and they wear bras on the heads lol. Theres a couple name flips as well.

I Felt one suffered a bad grammar wich didn’t help his execution at the end, long stringed Multies were fine but didn’t yield a strong sting..the other came with lb’s old style and had beter ways of connecting the concepts..

OK...... RBB USED A LONG MULTI STRING IN HIS OPENER WHICH I LIKED, THA PUNCH WASNT THAT GREAT THO TBH, THA EGG-YOLK/CRACK SHELLS IS A REALLY PLAYED OUT CONCEPT AN THA ''PAYIN NO MONEY FOR THAT'' PART OF THA RHYME WAS FAIRLY WEAK IMO.  2ND PART ''TALL MOM'' WAS A REALLY FORCED PART OF THA RHYME AN AGAIN THA ''SLUGZ - SHELLZ - SNAILS'' IS VERY SIMILAR TO YOUR PREVIOUS BAR WHICH AGAIN IS A PLAYED CONCEPT, YOU DID USE IT WELL THO AS THA FINAL RHYME THIS TIME WAS ALOT HARDER AN STUNG MORE THAN YOUR PREVIOUS.  THA 3RD BAR WAS MY FAV FROM YOUR VERSE THO, THA SET-UP LEADIN INTO THA ''THROWIN HANDS'' CLOSER TO THA BAR I ACTUALLY LIKED, DIDNT LIKE THA ''MY RAPS ARE HUNGRY FOR YOUR ASS'' PART THO THAT WAS A LIL WEIRD LOL.  CLOSER WAS OK THO AN WAS A MORE ORIGINAL CONCEPT THEN ALL YOUR PREVIOUS BARS....... DUB HAD A GOOD START AN THA ''WEIRD SCIENCE'' CONCEPT WAS ACTUALLY A GOOD ONE.  2ND BAR AGAIN I LIKED THA CONCEPT AS IT WAS A RELEVANT NAMEPLAY, FINAL PUNCH WAS QUITE FUNNY ACTUALLY, WASNT REALLY DIGGIN THA STUFF BEFORE IT THO TOO MUCH BUT THA CLOSER DID MAKE ME LOL....... ALL IN ALL RBB HAD BETTER RHYMIN THROUGHOUT AS ALMOST EVERY SINGLE RHYME DUB USED WAS OFF SYLLABLE WHICH HURT HIS VERSE ALOT, BUT THAT BEIN SAID HIS CONCEPTS WERE ALOT FRESHER AN MORE ORIGNAL AS RBB PRETTY MUCH WENT WITH THA ''SHELLZ, SLUGZ, SNAILZ, GUN, FIRING SHOTS'' ALL THA WAY THROUGH THA FIRST 75% OF THA VERSE, AN THAT HURT YOUR VERSE ALOT TOO AS IVE SEEN THAT KIND OF MATERIAL ALOT OVER THA YEARS AN ITS NOTHIN NEW AT ALL..... ITS TOUGH TO CALL COZ YOU CAN MAKE A CASE TO VOTE FOR EITHER VERSE..... IMMA GIVE IT TO DUB THO AS EVEN THO THA MAJORITY OF HIS RHYMES WERE OFF SYLLABLE HE BROUGHT MORE CREATIVITY TO THA TABLE, WAS MORE PERSONAL TO HIS OPPONANT AN LESS GENERIC, AN I JUS FELT HE PUT THAT LIL MORE EFFORT INTO THIS SPAR, SORT YOUR RHYMES OUT THO DUDE COZ THAT WILL CONTINUE TO HURT YOU DOWN THA ROAD... RBB TRY AN MAKE YOUR DISSES MORE RELEVANT TO YOUR OPPONANT COZ YOUVE SHOWN YOU CAN BE QUIRKY WITHIN YOUR CRAFT...... ENTERTAININ FROM BOTH THO..... FAIR IS DROPPED!

DUB YOU ONLY NEED TO CAP THA WORDS YOUR RHYMIN, SO IN YOUR OPENING BAR IF YOU HADNT CAPPED ''FIRING A'' AND ''WEIRD SCIENCE'' THEN ALL THA SYLLABLES WOULD MATCH...... IF YOU CAP A WORD PPL ARE GONNA READ THAT AS YOUR MEANING TO RHYME THAT WORD WITHIN YOUR MULTI SCHEME....... JUS SOME FRIENDLY ADVICE THATS ALL.

Thanks @hvk for a whole breakdown on the verses and I see what you mean by capping certain words I'm not rhyming with. I'll make sure change that to stop confusion.

One really surprised me and I think his opponent underestimated him. Roadblock, that opener wasgood but coulda been SOOO much doper. The concept was sick but the attempt at a 12 syllable multie made it sound choppy and the flowdidnt come off properly... DUB, you were super basic with your rhyming and concepts. Nothing special really, that closer had potential to br a hella good personal though but it came up short... Overall, RoadBlockBoy gets my vote for being more complex and punches that stuck for me.. Fairs in!