Can nobody touch this please? Voted: TheStudent / LOQ
Posted on: 2011-02-19 17:44:15

Good Luck To Whoever, No Noobs Please. -Stu Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-02-19 17:46:05

^Didnt see that. Sorry famo... EXPO: Griffin is a flying lion.Lyin/lion Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-02-19 18:28:01

Cunt In You/Continue seems forced, might be accent thing. Voted: TheStudent / LOQ
Posted on: 2011-02-19 18:30:31

Yeah when I say continue slow, thats what I get. Just like that word in our battle. Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-02-19 18:35:52

fv no h8 pleez vote back on my battle wit wadejr Voted: TheStudent / LOQ
Posted on: 2011-02-19 22:36:43

ONE WAS LIL OFF OTHER RETURNED QUALITY FAIR SHIT ALWASYS NEVER HATE VOTE BACK FAIR SUM1 SEND 8 Voted: TheStudent / LOQ
Posted on: 2011-02-19 23:13:54

MY BAD HIT WRONG BUTTON Voted: TheStudent / LOQ
Posted on: 2011-02-19 23:14:33

Ok, let's get to this. And you better be thankful cuz this gonna be a lot of typing... Ok??? ......Student: First bar = Ayo..I'm Like Goku In The Clouds...SEE ME, I'm FLY, No Doubt That Like Asian's In Class I Don't NEED TO TRY... No Homo But Baby I'm Burning But Your FEET'LL FRY/FETAL FRY, And I Bet This "Fruit'll Turn Red" When I BEAT/BEET THIS GUY! .... First thing I notice is 1st multie has an extra syllable. Then that Asian thing is just mehh. Not really that good, sorta stupid tbh. The Feet'll/Fetal Fry thing was decent but the Beat/Beet shit's really played so it didn't connect that hard. Just a mediocre bar here.... Next bar = UH. Like Noobs In CoD Just Quit PLAYIN' BITCH...Cause You've Just Got A "Gutter Flow" That's Why Your SPRAYIN' SHIT...So When I "Pop A Rat See/Paparazzi" It's Cause I'm MAKIN' HITS!! .... That CoD shit sounds wack. Really, it does. The gutter flow was aight, but the follow up Pop A Rat See/Paparrazi is really reaching. You'd have to say Rat like Rot which doesn't seem clean at all. The overall punch was mehh too.... Next bar = Now GetTheFuckOuttaHere Like Santa Rearranged (Satan) I'm SLAYING/SLEIGHING KID!! .... Same multie, but doesn't seem relative do I separated it. This was decent. Both meanings work, but the problem is relevance w/ the other multies that it is a part of. Nah mean!? ..... Next bar = And Yo..THIS BITCH SICK? Nah. His "See Through Bars" BORE MIME'S QUICK And WITH LIPSTICK You Still Couldn't "Make Up" YOUR MIND BITCH!! .... Ok, no real relevance on the setup. One line type stuff connected by same multie pretty much. The mimes thing was aight, not the freshest but decent. Not sure what BORE MIMES QUICK rhymes w/ though??? Then the makeup stuff isn't that fresh either, but it was still used nice w/ a little twist. Decent punch here..... Next bar = I'm Just "Going Off", Like A CRAZY SKYDIVER And You'll Be "Fallin' Off"...LAZY HANDGLIDER! Hahahaha Dam I'm JOKIN' SO MEAN And I Know That Last Bit Was A BROKEN MULTI But Fuck It My Life's Got "Dope wRaps" Even If I'm Not SMOKIN' SOUL GREEN!! .... Skydiver shit was cool, not great though. The lazy handglider is broken lol. The concept was decent though. The dope wraps was unoriginal but still decent in execution. Not amazing though.... Next bar = And It's HoodRich. I'm Still Reppin' For MY TEAM Even Though I Fell Off LB To Get More Fucking GREEN. Dam! Ayo. Student's GOT A LIFE? Dam RIGHT I'm That NICE And Every Fucking NIGHT I Don't Think TWICE About ROCKIN' MY WIFE!! ... No! Don't you go rhyming one word! The beginning of this bar was like all filler. Well, it pretty much all was filler. There wasn't even really a punch? Plus, you're a virgin so rocking your wife???? Haha..... Next bar = But Let's Get Back To THIS LAME Who's Parents Always Looked At In DISDAIN And Regret The Day He CAME Because Of His Retarded GAMES That Happen In His MEMBRANE!! ..... Your bars are getting simpler. Seriously, not a hard punch & there was no complexity. And you're continuing that one word rhyming. Why!?! Come on, your bars are falling off... Next bar = Wow. You Couldn't Buy Decent Writtens, Like THIS BITCH that BROKE? Well Watch Me X And O My Lines Down Like TIC TAC TOE!! .... Ok. The syllables are off. You have an extra one in there. Then the punch had a better concept than the two before but it still wasn't great. Not hitting hard at all ..... Next bar = OH. I'm A Fucking LEGEND, You Need To Quit MESSIN' And If The Gay Police Had A No Homo MESSAGE You Would Be The First One To Get QUESTIONED!! .... Back to one word rhyming??? Why!? Then even resorting to one word rhyming you didn't even make a good punch or concept. You're falling off in these bars bad right now .... Last bar = Now It's Time For The FINISHER, Bringin' The Cold Do I Hear A LITTLE BURR? Cause Ur "Below My Giant Level"...MINIATURE!! ..... Same EXACT thing as the last bar. Really I'm surprised cuz I expected more from you. I remembered your bars being better? Not sure if this was LightWork or what but this whole drop had some big problems. Giving you an honest rate here.... --------- Check: First bar = Key...There's a "Cunt In You/Continue"..but don't "KEEP GOIN"..you're SPEECH SPOKEN..sayin you're HEAT TOTIN?..Ha..your TREES SMOKED & "produce" a "clean, healthy home" like the "Clorox" BLEACH SLOGAN!! .... Like I said in my other comment, Cunt In You/Continue seems forced to me. This bar had some filler that could have been gotten rid of. The end punch made sense, but had no real big connection or sting. The build up also had no real relevance evident. Could have been better w/ better execution ..... Next bar = But I can TURN THAT AROUND..and let guns "Flip U"..now you've LEARNED HOW TO "FROWN" :(..!! .... Ok this bar had a good idea but it was a stretch. The upside down U itself doesn't make a frown. Nah mean!? I liked your intentions, but it would have been a whole lot doper w/ better execution ..... Next bar = Look..he brings BASIC DISPLAY..and I'll force him to "Width Draw"..if he tryna "lengTHEN" HIS "BASE"!! .... This was a nice concept. Still needs a better execution to make you say WOW! Cuz it just makes you say, "Hmm...That was nice." Haha. Nah mean!? ..... Next bar = .YO! IT'S SAD YA FUSSIN..cuz I'm GOING PAST YA CUZZIN..One "run has "Ended Your Track Record"..like "Caster" POSING AS A WOMAN!! .... This was decent. Nothing mind boggling but not bad. Not much to say besides that .... Next bar = No "Tricks" when we "Dress In Masks" we AIN’T "TREATING"!!..Just "picture" his "FRAME" LEAKING!!..Parts? I’ll leave him "lion by his tongue" if this MANE'S SPEAKING!..And let his "Neck Rest".."In The Sky"..like comfy PLANE SEATING!! ... My biggest problem is the fact there is NO relevance at all between each line. It takes away from the punch. & the concepts weren't that fresh but still aight. Not really impressed but not disappointed. Relate your lines for better punches. Trust me, you'll never be considered dope unless your setups are nice. Anyone can make good punchlines, not many can make good setups .... Next bar = .Since you "vent" those "not nice" bars..I’ll SQUEEZE "MEAN HEATERS"!..Leave you in the "Middle" of "No Where/Wear" like you're "in-BETWEEN STREAKERS"!! .... There was more relevance here. It was all about shooting/killing him, but it still could have more connection. Like if the first line had something to do w/ shoes or something. Starting to understand??? .... Next bar = Haha.You 'twisting metal'?..it's (door)DO KNOBS..WHOLE PROBlem is that the only thing you'd "Fire" is a BLOW "JOB"!! ... Again, there's a little bit of relevance but not a whole lot. The punch was mediocre, nothing great. Connect all the multies! It'll elevate you a lot ..... Next bar = You're from Cali?... *COUGH*..MAN YA BEST BELIEVE..that it's true irony that "Lost AND YA LESS' THAN ME!!/losangeles ..... Ok the whole bar was relevant w/ the Cali theme, but the wordplay was forced. Lost AND YA LESS/Los Angeles is forced. There's no way an accent fixes it either. So this needed to be more clean or smooth to be better .... Next bar = Thinking you can "stand" A PEDIGREE??..You "eating"? and making a BETTER KEY?..The only thing you'd 'Put Together' is a RECIPE!! .... NOPE! This bar should have been discarded. The one word rhyming plus very simplistic concept is not working. Don't use these type of bars please. .... Next bar = He's not "qualified in schooling" me...I'm HOT & PAST HIS PLACEMENT!!..They always do "Check Before Student"...like COLLEGE APPLICATIONS!! .... Ok there was relevance w/ the school theme. & you used your own name & his which is one of my personal favorite things. A decent bar here, still not amazing though. ..... Next bar = But even if he CAME WITH HOT BARS..He'd still "be riding under RULE"...and probably start BLAMING COP CARS!! .... Ok first off, no relevance again. Then the punch just wasn't that great cuz of the falseness in it. Student doesn't ride RULE & RULE doesn't ride Student. If you do personals they have to be true or they do no damage. Aight!? ..... Last bar = Stop saying how you'll kill my FAMILY GUY!..The saying if you're "Lion Your Flying" that makes "Stu/Stew Griffin" like FAMILY GUY! ..... Ok, getting more relevance. This concept is played though. Seen it used at least 5 times. So it isn't a strong punch to be cuz it's nothing new. Ok bar though....Dropping an honest rating too. ------ Final Call: One got this easily even though I expected more from both. Dropping a high 6-low 7 on real ratings. No hate to either, but I'm being true...... Fuck, I wrote a Book. No pun intended... LOL Voted: TheStudent / LOQ
Posted on: 2011-02-20 00:43:05

Thanks For The Feedback @ Black Book, And Yes Your Right I Didn't Really Try, Obvious With The One Word Rhyming But It's Cool, Good Battle @ GzG. Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-02-20 19:30:24

Fo sho, good battle. Next time we battle, it wont be a keystyle. Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-02-20 23:21:42

haha cunt in you line was sick... FV Voted: TheStudent / LOQ
Posted on: 2011-02-21 03:48:00

no h8 Voted: TheStudent / LOQ
Posted on: 2011-02-21 14:25:20

like both fv Voted: TheStudent / LOQ
Posted on: 2011-02-21 15:46:54

better flow overall Voted: TheStudent / LOQ
Posted on: 2011-02-21 15:54:32

shit i voted wrong one FUCK! soz kite Voted: TheStudent / LOQ
Posted on: 2011-02-21 15:59:14

gb Voted: TheStudent / LOQ
Posted on: 2011-02-21 17:05:42

RingLeaderZ! nice battle Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-02-21 17:21:18

cunt in you/continue is so played. and yesh people be forcing that shiit out like pregnancy. students overall verse is on point buttt the pop a rat see is said popa rott see :D but it could work iguess. but u had some creative stuff in there like minature line, slayed, and ishh keep at it and ull get this rapshiit on lock. kite had some good shiit too. nothing that made my jaw drop buttt lyrics were theree. one brought more to the table. fair. Voted: TheStudent / LOQ
Posted on: 2011-02-21 21:18:00

good stuff Voted: TheStudent / LOQ
Posted on: 2011-02-22 00:28:37

GB Voted: TheStudent / LOQ
Posted on: 2011-02-22 03:50:30

WOWW. im fuckin seepy. ima go to sleep, and by the time i wake up, the battle will be over, which sucks. But.. whaever.. good night... if i get back on in time i wanna vote it.. cause its so doepeepepepe Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-02-22 07:41:46

Man I'm feeling both sides on this. However, Student came with nice pucnhlines and his flow was easier to follow. Kite also had some flow and sick punches but it was hard to follow his flow. Ill battle other than that. FV and no h8. Voted: TheStudent / LOQ
Posted on: 2011-02-22 09:38:21

GB Always FV VBF Voted: TheStudent / LOQ
Posted on: 2011-02-22 13:13:41

fv Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-02-22 13:53:25

no h8 Voted: TheStudent / LOQ
Posted on: 2011-02-22 15:18:01

no hate Voted: TheStudent / LOQ
Posted on: 2011-02-22 15:34:25

Nice cod shit Voted: TheStudent / LOQ
Posted on: 2011-02-22 16:23:35

Not the best I've seen from you guys, but one edged it here, with a more consistent verse. Voted: TheStudent / LOQ
Posted on: 2011-02-22 16:48:40

Felt one just all around edged it with better executed concepts... Fvz In Voted: TheStudent / LOQ
Posted on: 2011-02-22 17:40:39

nb Voted: TheStudent / LOQ
Posted on: 2011-02-22 18:20:03