Tear it up y'all... Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2012-03-13 22:06:43

Fairs in, Fuels out... Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2012-03-17 14:30:58

I've analyzed this time and time again. One's just from a fresher angle all the way around. Good luck. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2012-03-18 22:51:33

This gonna be hotttttt. Good luck gents! Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2012-03-13 11:42:22

This gonna be dope if both come correct Posted on: 2012-03-13 17:45:32

looking forward to this ... Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2012-03-15 16:21:36

yo remarK you betta chew dis nigga. Ol Columbis, Georgia country ass grits and ham ass nigga. Posted on: 2012-03-16 17:13:46

Whoaaaa This Shit Crazyyyy I Cant Even Front One Had My Fav Drop So Far FV Is In No Hate At All Felt One Came With His A Game & The Other Had a Good Drop But Not Top Potential . Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2012-03-17 04:06:05

This was crazy. I won't expo because it will sway but PM me if you want me to! Went for the fresher most original verse. Fair vote is in. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2012-03-17 08:43:28

Lil close here. One really brought some really thought out, nicely executed punches while the other had nice punches but nothing that genuinely shined out. My fair is in, goodluck to the winner. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2012-03-17 08:48:40

Fv. Good battle. No sway. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2012-03-17 11:38:53

Fuck it, no sway but... Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2012-03-17 12:01:42

Crazyyyy as fuck battle. Fairs in. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2012-03-17 12:13:14

Really good show on both ends, but parts of ones multies really took away from the pound effect. Fairs in the mix. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2012-03-17 14:33:59

I got a winner Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2012-03-17 18:08:10

and a vote lol Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2012-03-17 18:09:03

Dope verses from both...one took it. PM if you need expos. Fair. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2012-03-18 10:19:39

remarK: "Prose??? can't say that I KNOW HIM but most of his LINES BROKEN so as for the win? he gotta be "pulling strings" once these "BLINDS OPEN"... win/window + pulling strings/blinds/blind battle. It all ties in neatly for me with 1 exception. The use of the word "Once" there's a conflicting tense. Once implies the blinds have already been opened so why would he be pulling the strings? To close them again? But nowhere in that bar is there any suggestion of that so I think I'm right in saying what I said about the tense. I'm not just nit picking here either, that genuinely jumped out at me. But other than that everything else is on point beside the somewhat played wordplay of pulling strings and blinds. No h8 I'm just calling it how I see it.n"your bars are just FORCED, LISTEN I'm smooooth swangin' to leave this "BOOB HANGIN" you can see his SUPPORTS MISSIN'... now he's toast-ya'll this couldn't be a "CLOSE CALL" if he rang me from SHORT DISTANCE!" Very played man lol you know what I mean. Close call/short distance is not fresh in the slightest. I think you'll even agree with me on that 1 given how long you've been doing this for. It was too dated to land a decent hit for me, sorry. "I don't think this BUM'S WORTH HIS RHYMES saying his GUN BURSTS IS LIES! cuz that aint Somethin'-You-Would only way you "COME FROM THE HOOD" is cuz you're UNCIRCUMSIZED!" This was a bit better only for the fact it all linked unlike the last line which was more of a 1 liner. It all fit in neatly but the uncircumcised/come from the hood play is not hitting "beating me aint likely, it's IMPOSSIBLE CLOWN... once this round-closes the crowd- knows-it's just another OBSTACLE DOWN for the one who's bound to MODEL THE CROWN...... time to take the trash out and leave 'em "ASSED OUT" like a "HOSPITAL GOWN" I've see/heard the hospital gown a few times. Don't ask me where because it was a long time ago. That shit's older than god's dog tbh. Plus everything before it was just filler. Which ended in a dated 1 liner. "Prose is SIMPLY A LIAR wit bars that are SHITTY n' TIRED you must be DREAMIN TO WIN DAWG cuz he always "SEAMS TO BE RIPPED ON" like a HIPPIES ATTIRE..." WP only worked 1 way and again like the Assed out/hospital gown the hippy line is dated and generic. And what's with all the filler? "it SOUNDS LIKE HE'S STUMPED try n' take this ROUND IF YOU WANT but once I'm "Trash-in his subconscious" he'll be "DOWN IN THE DUMPS" This was better, still an old angle to take plus it's too cliche. Trash/dumps shit like that been said so much there really is NO possible way to flip it to make it sound fresh and relative. Try referencing current events. That's the best way to stay relevant without using personals. "let's be real for a minute..... this aint no CASHIS BOUT FOR THE WORLD but when I say this Guy-Fakes-Stuff it aint somethin' that "EYE MAKEUP" when he "LASHES OUT" LIKE A GIRL." I/eye make up lashes eyes/lashes rage. Simple enough bit it doesn't work both ways due to the wording of the bar.n"shit is bout to get hostile like I'm bringin' the COLD WAR BACK it's more than being TOL YOU'RE WACK... nobody CARES NOW TO HELP 'EM cuz you "WEAR OUT YOUR WELCOME" like an OLD DOOR MAT." Again it's cliche'd. the referencing of OBJECTS is a common theme. CURRENT events or PERSONALS. It's all bland. It's About more than just fitting in a wordplay. The subject matter plays a big part too. "when it comes to a tourney like this we know that EACH STAGE IS KEY... so to be on this level you're a DEEP WAYS TO BE cuz your Flows Wack N You're Boring Dawg... so I'll send "Prose/Pro's Back to The Drawing Board" like "FREE AGENCY!....." You didn't need to explain the pro's nameplay in the bar, atleast not to me. Again it was a 1 liner with vague/irrelevant filler before it. Overall: 6. Too much filler and cliched, dated subject matter which I couldn't get past. Prose_: "(Remark's Wifey?) shit... if i felt like it i'd BOUNCE N' BREAK HER BACK-IN!!! POUND HER BRAINS OUT, SMASH IT and fuck ya "Gal Up Till Nightfalls" like JOUSTING'S WAGED IN MATCHES!!! (Gallop Till Knight Falls)"WP Was ight. Bar coulda been tighter though. Needed some proof reading. Work on your wording. "give him punches that'll lift up this shmuck when i send uppercuts to the MOUTH N' BANG IT RAPID!!! leave ya whole jaw "Raised Up Toothless" like HOW TO TRAIN YOUR DRAGON!!! (im teachin this little gay wad so its more like HOW TO TRAIN A FAGGOT)" Lol not bad, I get the reference. Nothing crazy but it was straight and fairly current. "you'd win if ya put more symbols in ya sent drop...ACTUALLY, NAH!! (WAIT) even if he switched structure style id still be SWAGGIN ON GUY'S GAME despite his verse "Dressed Up Different In The Weak Send" like CASUAL FRIDAYS!!! (week's end)" lol Nice job sticking to the theme, all relevant no filler WP works. "the fact you cant keep up wit my HARD EFFECTIVE WRITTENS aint a "Shock When It Comes Down To The Wire" like BARBED ELECTRIC FENCES!!!" Meh. Wasn't feeling it and I woulda left "HARD" and "BARBED" out of the bars. Seemed like you just wanted to up your multi count. "ya punchlines?... when ya MAKE EM no one underSTANDS WHAT YA RAPPIN!! does anyone ever get ya bars? NOPE!! THEY VAGUE AS SHIT!! ya couldnt make "ExPO'S TO SAVE YOUR SKIN" wit RadiATION for CANCEROUS RASHES!!! (Expose to Save Your Skin)" Nah Too cliche. Miss. "you da king?.. have you flyin in the air till you "Lift Off From The Throne" like YEEZY , BEY, AND HOV!! go to Brooklyn and shoot ya till blood SMEAR DA STREET N' GO!! have "Marcy's Walls Colored In Red" like Wayne's MIRROR VIDEO!! (Mars Sees..Expo)" Current but wasn't worded correctly. "HAVE" and "Mars SEE(S) Walls" don't go together. It's just broken.' it wasn't clean enough to hit for me. "Niggas in a certain part of my town will bang ya and leave ya BODY IN A HUMMER if ya cross a bad street or get LOST YA LITTLE FUCKER!! so stay in the suburbs white kid or "End Up On The Wrong Side Of The Tracks" like inCOMPETENT CONDUCTORS!!!!!" Lol, no wrong side of the tracks and incompetent Conductors is just cheesy and too vague a reference to really hit for me Overall 6: I couldn't get past Re's use of old plays. I wouldn't mind but they weren't flipped well enough for me to get over it. Shot was relentless. I know re can handle himself in audio and has a rep in text so maybe the long lay off got him rusty and a little behind on the times. No offence. Prose wasn't great but atleast it was more relevant/fresher. Plus had less filler, cutting down on the 1 liners. Just needs to be more consistent. Votes in. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2012-03-18 20:57:20

Nice battle, got my winner Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2012-03-19 06:08:05