good battle gents... i thought one came out with harder punches... fv is in fellas Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2018-06-27 14:16:51

for those that arent familiar with the concept tournament: the objective is to use the given concept and use references that are relavent or pertain to the concept and flip them into punches to diss your opponent...if your still unsure, refer to the previous ones.. also, since voters cant see my comments, you need to post the concept as part of your expo.so voters can see... please post by 06/26/18 midnight PDT or you will be DQ'ED.. voting will end 06/30/18 midnight.PDT

Tom Cruise Moms Shoes...AC's!

concept: TYPES OF INSECTS

AC's Spit Fresha' Than Jay-Z.

This was a dope little read man insects is tough ... FYI ... one of you should comment the concept as no one can see it ... I had to go forums to find out ... with that said both came nice wid the concept both had some st d out bars and both had some average ish ... this is a tough one to vote on had to read it three times to decide but in the end it comes down to the better read the cleaner execution and he one I felt stay on topic MVGT ... Rai I felt that caterpillar land was BOTB .... row I liked your lady bugged out bar .... fair is in good luck both ... .:X:.

Crazy bars from both man.. this shit was a Le Heater. Ones punches stood out more here but everything else bar wise was equal. Salute to both here yo both showed up to rip faces off. 100

Punches swinging from Rai. Gs. It all came down to the more clever punch and rai delivered it. 

row wow a great paragraph written with some caps and overall was good enough for my vote gb homes... Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2018-06-27 12:03:19

Row u nice but I would type a few more lethal bars and punches against ur opponent. Also, i think u need to lay low on the quotation marks. Sure u put them where its needed and thats fine, but some of them i felt u put too much , but other than that you are really nice with this rap so keep going just go a lil harder. Shout out to Ashville if ur from there. Rai I was really impressed by your verse. not only did u have good rebuttles to ur opponent but u had heavy punchlines. I like how u kept a theme. in this case insects. Im trying to see if u had flaws but I cant see any from u. so u got an 8.

BOTH DID REALLY GOOD HERE, HIGHLIGHTS WERE THA ''LADY BUGGED OUT'' AND THA 'TURN A NEW LEAF' PARTS..... THIS IS A TOUGH ONE, I FELT ONE WOZ SLIGHTLY AHEAD WIT KEEPIN TO THA SCHEME, CREATIVITY AND DELIVERY I CANT REALLY SEPERATE.... BTU ONE DID FLOW BETTER WIT SMOOTHER RHYMES, OK I GOTS A WINNER.... GL TO BOTH, FAIR IS DROPPED!

I felt Rai was coming mainly with his signature punch style, which is a setup and then a punch that's really obvious from the setup. He also opened with an absolutely atrocious wordplay (In Secs Decide / Insecticide). Row had some bad shit on his end too. Some of his punches were set up similarly to Rai's. The ladybug bar was awful - it made use of obscure facts and used the wordplay defense / da fence, which is nearing defeat / da feet in terms of how laughably played out it is at this point. With that said, I felt Row's bars were overall more creative and that he had a slightly cleaner read. Also, his Wasp bar was easily the bar of the battle. Fair's in.

Both were on an even playing field. I felt one tried to go a little too complex in wordplay and theme at times, while the other had more easily read and harder hitting concepts with swag and some personal shit threaded in... took it for me, but not by much. 

Row: Cricket line could've been worded better, without the expo you're kinda lost into knowing that you're talking about yourself being the Master. Camper bar could've been expanded on, felt cramped together, the wordplay doesn't work both ways either. Picnic punch was okay, I can think of worse "disasters", felt too strong of a word to use here. Wasps line was good, voy kinda stumbled me I had to look at the expo cause it didn't work on it own. Lady Bug line was good, standout bar of your verse but again I had to refer to your expo. Luigi line was cool but set-up could've been better. Overall pretty strong verse here, use of the concepts was above par but some set-ups were iffy and wording could've been polished. Felt like you could've been slightly less complex to not have the average reader have to analyze the expo and refer back to your verse.

Rai: Opener was nice, wordplay worked both ways. Budworm line was nice too, set-up wasn't really relavent to the punch but it all connected with the concept. Bed Bug line was great, clean & concise. Slug line was cool. Finisher was cool too. Overall it was a pretty clean verse, there was some minor typing issues that could've been better but it was pretty solid.

Thanks for the reads fellas, fair's in.

one was more complex but witty, had more punches that was on point fairs in

cool battle both were nice one had more shit i found to be more entertaining fv

Anbu! 

This was fucking rough.  I had to re-read it 2 times.

this was tooo close to call here, and since me and rai, were teamates a day ago, im going to abstain from voting on this one.. dont want to get accused for influencing a battle at the last minute, so with that great job to both and see one of you in the finals