Your scheme is: Run With The Devil

Good luck to both of you, battle of the round imo, looking forward to reading both

Deadline to post is May 10th, 7 days from when the scheme was announced, thanks

this was tooo close, i think one or tow of my loser's bars not quite having tha impact they could have had, lead me to choosing tha verse with a slightly better execution and some stronger punchlines ... read this a few times, dope shit ... fairs in

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FUCK, I NEED TO THINK OUT LOUD TO HELP ME DECIDE A WINNER HERE.......RAI......THA 'FENNEL' PART INTO 'HUMUS AN PRETZELS' WOZ A REALLY NICE CONNECTIN MULTI AN THA SET-UPS PREVIOUS WERE VERY CLEAN INDEED, HANSEL AN GRETTLE PART WOZ NICE AS FUCK!!!, THA CONCEPT SCHEME YOU KEPT MID-VERSE WIT ALL THA MUSIC SHIZ WOZ REALLY WELL KEPT, MEMBER SPOT FOR YOU INTO 'SHUT IN A KENNEL' ACTUALLY MADE ME LOL, YOUR SET-UPS WERE PERFECT THROUGHOUT THIS VERSE TOO THAT IMPRESSED ME ALOT ACTUALLY.......ENVOY......OPENIN FEW LINES WERE SICK AS FUCK!, JEKYLL PART WOZ A NICE TOUCH, 'TOP WHISTLE' LIKE I 'PLUGGED IN A KETTLE' WOZ SOLID, COVERED IN FRECKLES I LIKED ALOT, STOMACH TO SETTLE PART MADE ME LOL, OMFG YOU BOTH HAD A HANSEL WORDPLAY HOW FUCKIN WEIRD WOZ THAT HAHA...... DAMN THIS IS CLOSE... BOTH Y'ALL SET-UP YOUR PUNCHLINES PERFECTLY FROM TOP TO BOTTOM AN WERE EVENLY CONSISTANT..... ONE HAD A MULTI WHICH I THOUGHT WENT OFF SCHEME....THIS IS TOUGH COZ ONE HAD CONCEPTS THAT STRUNG OVER A FEW BARS WHILE THA OTHER CAME WIT MORE SOLID HITS CONSISTANTLY...... FUCKINHELL, OK IMMA LAY MA VOTE DOWN.....DOPE AS FUCK FROM BOTH, SERIOUSLY IT WAS ALMOST LIKE IT WASNT A RHYME SCHEME BATTLE WIT ALL THA HITS THAT WERE THROWN.......FAIR IS DROPPED!

Gb fv

The punches is what brought envoy my vote.

Other than that you both were equal

Fairs in

I think I wasnt supposed to say who I voted for.... oops

.Both Verses are went in...read them 2wice... similar concepts from both.....ones had more original flips on them Props to both... Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2018-05-08 11:08:53

one dude did better then I thought he would. Other did his per usual slaughtering. Closer then expected but I have my winner. Good luck to both 

If SON'S DISRESPECTFUL. These "Hands'll Show He's In The Wrong Place ", but I ain't on the SUBJECT OF "GRETTLE" this bar was dope and the closer no h8 both were dope

Entertaining read from both.

I felt one had slightly better control of the scheme with relevant build ups to the punches more consistently. 

ERRON BLACK ASKED FOR HIS VOTE TO BE REMOVED AS HE VOTED FOR THA WRONG PERSON...... IVE DONE THIS, FEEL FREE TO RE-VOTE BRO

Before I even start, I want to note how bad Rai's spelling was. HUMAS, GRETTLE, METALS, and misspelling BRINDLES as BRENDLES in the verse and BRENDAL(s) in the expo - that didn't make a good impression of your IQ at all.

But your punches were actually alright. I don't think you had a single bad punch in here, although nothing blew me away either. The Highway to Hell scheme was fire, how you brought back-to-back punches on the same theme. Still, a lot of the punches in here were predictable or not particularly clever. Execution was fine throughout, nothing to complain about except the spelling really, but nothing superb either.

envoy, I think you were on a higher conceptual level than Rai overall, but you also had some punches I take exception to. For example, "coz when you Utterson we turnin to Hyde"... that doesn't work perfectly both ways grammatically. It's close to but it really doesn't. Same with "fall pray to Buddhist guy."

Then there's the His Kin / His Skin wordplay - I don't know about you, but when I say that out loud, it doesn't quite work right unless I reeeaaaallllly stretch my enunciation. SHOVELS FA GEMSTONES didn't fit the scheme as far as I'm concerned. Your best material knocked Rai's highs out of the park, though.

Best bars from both:

We wouldnt see an "Eruption From Your Music" if you "STRUMMED INSTRUMENTALS" when i show you "The Highway To Hell", for tryna "RUN W/THE DEVIL!!!''

I’m no tin-man but theres “no heart when i “COME W/ THE METAL” “hell be in hotter water” than the TUB OF THE DEVIL

I'm feeling extremely generous with the rates today, so... Fair's in. 7-7.

Great battle I was entertained here but it was basically word play vs punches and metaphor for metaphor and it was hard to choose but winner had a couple punches that were hitting harder and metaphors we're more dynamic. Hard to vote but fairs

yo envoy is the only guy thats not hall of famer status in his crew lmao

Good reads from both, but one had a few more haymakers in terms of connecting concepts and punches.

I think im goin too vote for rai was some good raps and lyrics put together then the opponent gb Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2018-05-10 12:06:25

Battle of the round for real for real, this was DOPE overall. This was insanely close but I felt like my winner edged this with being slightly more creative, felt more fresher.

Gave this two or three reads, and at the end of each read. I was more entertained by one, the other had some references that were dope after researching but still just didn't hit as deep as the others punches, who I felt was a little more consistent with freshness within his bars. I also feel like both had some iffy parts, but I will just say that's cause of the scheme. Fairs in fellas, good-luck to both.