Scheme: BREAKFAST IN THE AFTERNOON Please have your verse in by Sunday March 20th before 11:59 pm EST. Anyone who hasn’t posted by the deadline will be DQ’d. Good luck and make it a dope one. Posted on: 2016-03-18 14:31:19

This shit was heavy... I'll be back to drop a vote. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2016-03-20 17:15:13

One verse had some of the best scheme work i have seen on this site tbh, one of his best verses too. My winner too had some problems. Some of them being that the words in his multie sets were filler though they were relevant to the end punch, i felt the words became redundant after a while. Winner had the better and more creative concepts. Loser had a better flow in my opinion as his bars rolled off the tongue in a better way but punch for punch, the winner had better ideas than the loser. Both the battlers had a good idea of a double ended multi especially because its a 7 syllable scheme. Fair is in Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2016-03-20 17:55:02

Voting will end in 48 hours! Posted on: 2016-03-21 12:16:17

You both are talented, but I think this scheme got the best of the both of you. From one, I could tell a few of the multie sets were forced, whether it was filler or the punchline. Not sure if that came from the lack of options to rhyme from or because you're not used to constructing verses using longer multies. I say that because I've seen your other battles. You don't normally use long schemes or rhymes. But nonetheless your drop wasn't bad. To the other, you ARE used to using multies this length because it's kinda more towards your style and you have more experience over your opponent. With that being said, you as well had some multies that were a little forced or didn't have relation with the scheme, such as trying to rhyme Web Page and Breakfast. Once again, I know this scheme was a hard one but I can't ignore technical errors when voting. With that being said, it was a solid drop. You had some great ideas that came across fresh, and you didn't waste much time with filler. A lot of your drop was set up, punch....set up, punch... Which is always exciting to read. But great battle y'all. Both came with some nice lines and both had just a little that needed to be tweaked or reworded. Fair is in. 1. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2016-03-21 17:22:11

This shit was heavy . Both worked dope on the scheme . Keep up the work . Posted on: 2016-03-21 20:36:47

This was a nice little battle here felt the punches were kinda even..The only difference to me was one rolled off the tongue better in terms of the wording and overall flow...So I felt that helped them with the scheme..Both did have areas where they had errors but they were still decent verses...Got one the fairs in Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2016-03-21 20:58:54

Both drifted off the scheme to some extent... one did so more severely. Both had some bad punches and good punches. One just handled the scheme better and was more entertaining. Fair's in. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2016-03-21 21:15:20

this was a close battle.. my winner was tad better with scheme fairs in.. conceptually both were good and had some decent lines Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2016-03-22 01:23:36

Vote concealed .. dope battle could go either way tbh Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2016-03-22 02:24:59

ok ,flows - you stuck to the scheme ok but was a bit messy in places , and feel like some were kinda forced in places . but its not easy doing a 16 scheme so can forgive a bit. had some ok punches and a couple of personals . some decent concepts as well , but a few lines were not linked to any concept , just punches . lil bit of filler as well but overall a nice drop . lock - i like the way you linked your concepts and stuck nicely to the scheme throughout . also had a dope flow when i read it all the way thru in my mind - btw read both 3 times to make sure lol . so for me , one was ahead in a couple of key areas , but other has some high points as well , and both had some funny lines which i always like to see . nice spar tho m thanks for the read and gl to the winner . Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2016-03-22 22:34:31