#BowDown!! Posted on: 2014-09-10 17:52:21

Both verses must be submitted by 11:59 PM EST (GMT -4) on September 13th. Good luck gentlemen! Posted on: 2014-09-10 05:38:44

ACs! Posted on: 2014-09-10 12:15:50

Props to both for posting so early. This was a nice battle here I re read 3x to make sure I didn't miss anything. One had a very smooth flow/swag and used that to their advantage as it made the punches hit harder....wording was crisp as well. I just felt they could have thrown a few more punches as the punch count wasn't as high. The other was fairly smooth but had a few wording issues. Higher punch count but I felt they were all over the place. Some execution issues as well due to wording. Overall my winner here simply was smoother and had better execution. Fairs dropped Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-09-10 13:35:09

Very good battle, Read a couple times for my decision (and enjoyment) I really felt like my loser took a bar or 2 to get off the ground and really start landing some hits, once he did it was nice. My winner stayed consistent for the most part and took it to him right from the jump. Both came at each others throats but felt one was more consistent with his bars. Good battle fellas. Fairs in. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-09-10 13:54:16

Last line. ***the place that it belongs Posted on: 2014-09-10 16:11:42

Manny summed up my views exactly. Nice spar gents, one was smoother and harder overall tho. 1/ Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-09-10 17:01:53

I'll be back to this. Posted on: 2014-09-10 17:22:29

RULE.. ur comment desperately deserves a pause. Posted on: 2014-09-10 17:23:24

AC's.. Posted on: 2014-09-10 20:08:40

Both came in swinging.. ones elevated leaps and bounds ..good ish one consistently flowed nice due to the minimal spacing between multis. Alot of concepts thrown around by both.. felt my winner came off wit some very nice scheme work with deeper conceptual punches..fairs in and props to both for a nice battle. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-09-10 22:01:44

both had some dope as concepts and was pretty consistent through it all, I literally felt like this came down to wording and readability that gave one verse a smoothness to edge out the other. all around dope though. votes in. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-09-10 22:08:57

one was outclassed on all levels imo Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-09-11 00:02:42

just wow...I think one might get the title..just wow! I enjoyed reading this battle from both of you but one just destroyed the other for me. Punches were sick, every line on point, and just a straight up fire round. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-09-11 02:54:35

voting like a killa. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-09-11 11:55:53

Thought both came with pretty decent ish here.... def some quotables from both.. One was a little more consistant which edged for me..nice read... the tourney is heating up for sure ..ez 100 Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-09-11 16:25:49

BOW DOWN Posted on: 2014-09-11 22:56:48

Mad close got my winner though Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-09-11 23:56:02

#KeepGrindin' Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-09-12 20:46:39

First Of All, Props On Posting Right Away Even Though I'm Voting Now. It's Hard Enough Typing Up 16 Bars For A Tournament But To Post Them Up Almost The Same Day? That's WORK. Anyway...On To Voting... remarK: Overall Your Whole Verse Was Pretty Much On Point From Start To Finish I Just Felt Like You Had One Played Concept. I Won't Point It Out For The Sake Of Swaying But Other Then That You Were Pretty Golden. Only Critique I'd Give Is To Maybe Incorporate One Or Two More Punchlines But Honestly That's Mostly Preference. I Feel Like Everyone Should Do Their Own Style Without Having To Strive For Punchline Artists Because There Is A Lot More To A Verse Then Just Punchlines. Just Keep Your Thing Man And Sorry For The Mini Rant In This Expo Lol Anarchist: Overall I Enjoyed Your Verse But At The Same Time I Felt Like You Could've Been More Creative In Your Approach. You're Set-Ups Could've Been Cleaner As Well. You Did Have Some Good Concepts But I Felt Like Your Delivery Was Lacking To Convey Them. I'd Just Say Work On Those Categories And You'll Be Great. Overall Battle: Felt Like The Winner Took It Overall In All Aspects, The Loser Tried To Be Creative But I Feel Like They've Got Work To Do In Order To Proceed In A Tournament Arena. Good Battle Here Fellas, Fair's In. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-09-14 18:45:32

Acs... Yall wrong for both havin Down syndrome lines lol Posted on: 2014-09-15 04:45:25