The fairs in, lads. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-09-11 16:36:25

Both verses must be submitted by 11:59 PM EST (GMT -4) on September 13th. Good luck gentlemen! Posted on: 2014-09-10 05:38:14

LoD Posted on: 2014-09-10 10:12:09

AC's.. Posted on: 2014-09-10 20:06:49

one had the best verse i personally ever read from them, opener had it for me tbh Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-09-11 00:01:15

Good battle.. Seen some high potential in one of you.and i dont mean wit dat hydro..but one came correct in the concepts..complexity .one came tite wit the flow along wit a few hits here and there.leaning this way for creativity..fairs in fellahs Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-09-11 00:42:20

This is a pretty evenly matched round. I see you both as some of the top newer folks on the site in terms of using the LB structure well and packing in concepts... I'd say just watch how many concepts you're packing in and mind how relevant they really are because it can totally water down the verse in terms of how genuinely you're getting at your opponent. It rather becomes a creative mess so to say. All in all, I think both had similar faults, but one was more creative in their approach. You both definitely had your cool moments, though. It could probably go either way depending on preference. Funny that you both had these wonky, out there ghost references... lol votes in... Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-09-11 00:46:55

One was just more polished Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-09-11 01:05:13

I'm going with retard on this one. Evenly matched battle. I liked the blair witch line from obey and the forum line from punk. One just had a nicer flow and better punchlines. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-09-11 03:01:02

The fair's in. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-09-11 08:43:36

voting like a killa. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-09-11 11:42:51

I'm on the same boat as remark here and yet again I felt the wording and smoothness through one verse edged it here. Personal preference may make that a deciding factor for myself but I feel like it helps the punches out more with pepper wording and makes lines less predictable over all dope battle though votes in. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-09-11 12:24:31

fair is tossed Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-09-11 16:31:04

Some risky concepts here definitely. I feel like one came more direct with real personals sort of which was pretty neat, one was definitely a better read, messed up on a multie or two lol.. but overall not a bad battle, solid tourney battle. Respect to both you, good luck. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-09-11 22:54:16

#KeepGrindin' Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-09-12 20:38:18

Obey: Overall I Enjoyed Your Verse But I Felt Like Your Started Strong But Gradually Went Down Till The Closer. I'd Just Say Work On Consistency But If You Make Your Whole Verse Like Your First Half, You'll Be Golden Man. Punk: Overall Your Verse Was Cool, I Just Felt Like You Tried To Mesh Too Many Concepts In There Although You Did Have A Couple Hard Hitting Punches. I'd Just Say Work On Your Wording To Make Your Verse Cleaner And Maybe You'll Be Able To Blend Everything Together Or Maybe Cut Down On A Few Concepts For The Sake Of Having A Easier Verse To Read. Overall Battle: I Felt Like This Was A Pretty Close Battle But Since Only One Can Win, I Felt Like The Winner Hit Slightly Harder While They Both Were Pretty Creative As Far As Punches Go. Truly Enjoyed Reading Both Verse Fellas, Fair's In. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-09-14 18:30:27

shakes head and walks out here..smh texting Posted on: 2014-09-14 21:47:26

Fuk benson. Acs Posted on: 2014-09-15 04:19:49