One's wordplay was very poor. The other had flow but little to no punches. One took this with a more coherent verse. Fairs in. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-09-09 11:39:18

Both verses must be submitted by 11:59 PM EST (GMT -4) on September 7th. Good luck to y'all! Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-09-05 00:14:11

Expo: 6th bar - "U/You and N/in can never join because between them there isn't the LETter R/ARE". It means that "You are" will never have "in" between them. "You are in". So "You never go in"... ... 18th bar - "I'm coming/cumming at this 'pussy, mad' like I'm a FURIOUS PENIS". No homo. Lol. Posted on: 2014-09-07 09:32:06

Daaaaaaaaaaaaaamn dat Robin bar though haha holy shit. Gl. Posted on: 2014-09-07 09:34:29

Oh and 9th bar - "I go right day and night" (right/write) Meh. Posted on: 2014-09-07 09:45:05

I can see my loser put some effort in, but he just wasn't ready for this caliber of opponent. I'd recommend working on being a little less repetitive with the concepts too. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-09-07 11:44:12

My loser had troubles with almost every aspect of battle rap to be honest. My winner won with experience basically votes in. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-09-07 12:03:38

Ones flow and scheme work alone took this ..add in the punches and i got my winner. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-09-07 14:04:56

lol fair is in Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-09-07 14:46:30

ooooooo...... Posted on: 2014-09-07 15:58:48

Clear winner here. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-09-08 00:13:20

Conceptually it was fairly even, but one's execution was just far superior here. FV Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-09-08 01:55:15

Easiest decision of the whole second round for me. Good job from both, but one was far above. I thoroughly enjoyed the winners verse SO much, he stayed on one scheme most of the battle and it was the smoothest read I've read so far, with good concepts.. in a shorter version, awesome. lol good battle fellas, my vote is in. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-09-08 07:45:58

One got this in the bag. Better in every aspect. Vote's in... Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-09-08 12:57:12

Soly: Overall I Felt Like Your Verse Was Trying To Be Complex But You Mainly Just Were Rhyming. There Were A Definitely Insults Towards Your Opponent But I Felt Like None Of Them Were Specifically About Your Opponent. I'd Say Work On Forming Punchlines With Insults And You Can Have A Few Generic Punchlines But You're Really Going To Want To Attack Your Opponent Personally. Mainly By Using Wordplay With Their Name, Avatar, Anything You Know About Them That's Common Knowledge, etc. You Could Even Ask Around And See If Anyone Knows Anything About Them To Get Some Background That Way. Your Insults Were Okay But They Need To Be More Creative Especially In A Tournament Setting. Just Work On Those Aspects And I Feel Like You'll Be On The Right Track. UrbZ: Overall Your Verse Was Good But They Were A Few Played Concepts In Their. The Execution Wasn't Bad But Creatively They Could've Been Better. I Felt Like Your Flow And Multi's Were On Point Besides That. Also, If You Clean Up Your Verse Slightly Regarding Wording And Be A Bit More Creative You Have A Really Good Change Of Taking This Whole Tournament. Overall Battle Was Good But Honestly Felt Like This Was One Sided With The Winner Displaying More Proficient Skills In Almost All Aspects. I Still Feel Like Both Of You Could Be Better And I Look Forward To Reading Your Future Battles. Fair's In Fellas. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-09-08 15:49:54

APOC !!!! Posted on: 2014-09-08 16:18:26

votin like a killa. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-09-09 06:50:49

I felt one was just simply on another level here. Needs to pick it up when moving onto the next round though. Fairs dropped Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-09-09 12:23:44