Very close. The fairs in, Lads. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-09-04 16:32:39

My BOTR-sense is going off Posted on: 2014-09-02 23:16:05

Expo: Denton, Noble, Eth & Illokwent are all staff/moderators. Blue's Brothers, Blue Steel & Blue Crush are all movie titles. Let's Get It Posted on: 2014-09-03 23:44:04

LoD Posted on: 2014-09-04 00:43:21

Ugh.... ok... I was asked by Illo to vote so here goes, as nice as I can lol. My winner; Your multi's were less than impressive in some parts, you had words in there that rhymes with NOTHING you had setup in the multi before. The syllable count was on point, but the rhyme scheme was actually horrible in some parts. What I think won you this battle was the mediocre punches and the above average use of references that carried you here, as well as the usage of some basic wordplay. Your first wordplay.... do us a favor, and don't ever do shit like that again, for the love of LB, just don't. Other than that, it wasn't too bad, but definitely work on those areas. To my loser, you had some cleaner punches, but overall your multi's were 2-3 syllables. Bro, this is letsbeef, not a dr seuss book. Not just that, but also the wordplays you used were just as basic as my winners, except it didnt hit as hard in some spots. you had ONE really dope ass concept (which i wont say because of spoiler alerts), but that was really the only thing that stood out to me. Everything else seemed bland. Your multis were not only shorter, but when you tried to use longer ones you filled them with unnecessary off the wall and stupid shit. Definitely want to work on tightening them up and making a dope play in every multi / line. Anyways... take it or leave it, thats my honest opinion. Both of you should work on those areas. Good luck in the rest of the tourny bro's. Fv In. #BeLikeSkizzo :high: Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-09-04 02:06:40

Both brought it and I enjoyed it. Nice moments from both yet my winner was constant and consistent. While one had a couple nice punches the other had all nice punches. Wordplay from both was on point and Multis were decent and nothing too forced. Came down to punch count imo. Best battle so far. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-09-04 02:52:35

Not a bad read here, got my winner quite easily but thats not to say my loser didnt show up. Votes in Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-09-04 03:10:12

CONCEALED VOTE.. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-09-04 07:49:33

Ayt...niceness here...goin with the one that showed consistency, better concepts and delivery....other came nice too but id say pushed his concepts bit too far...No h8....feelin like Octavia right about now.... Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-09-04 09:34:47

Decent spar. I think whoever advances must step it up in the rounds to come though. There were mistakes on both sides. I went with the verse that had lines I found more straightforward and entertaining. Fairs. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-09-04 10:03:55

This was a super hard decision. Both brought it in their own right and I don't want to go too much into detail and give away the winner IMO... but I read each verse plenty of times and finally came to a verdict... Vote's in. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-09-04 12:36:06

fair vote is in Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-09-04 13:44:08

Too close. Winner had harder hitting punches. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-09-04 16:35:43

Close, the fair's in. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-09-04 17:12:41

Bleu: Opener Was Nice (Up To Magic Lamp) Besides The Obviously Played Wordplay "Cell/Sell" Come On Bro, You Can't Start A Tournament Battle Like That Lol Anyways, Felt Like The First Part Was Nice Cause It Connected And Flowed Good But The 3 Part Was Slacking A Bit As It Didn't Match The Ending Punchline. Either Way Nice Lil' Start Here. 2nd Part Was Dope, Liked The Flow And Cadence Of The Verse And How It Had A Gangsta Tone To It. Also, Like The Personal About Him Biting. Closer Was Nice But I Felt Like You Fell Off From The Middle Part Of Your Verse. Not Bad At All Though, I Look Forward To Reading More Of Your Battles. Dysfunctio nal: Opener Was Okay But I Felt Like The First Two Bars Or Parts Were Filler And The Background Punchline Wasn't The Strongest TBH To Start Out With. 2nd Line Had A DOPE Concept But Again Felt Like You Had Too Much Filler In There And It Could've Come Off A Lot Fresher. Work On Cutting It Down To Basics Especially When You've Got A Dope Concept, You Don't Want To "Bog" Down Your Verse With Unnecessary Words, Make It Look Effortless Even If It Took You A Couple Hours. Third Part And Your Closer Were More Or Less The Same As Before. I Felt Like The Samus Suit Punch Was Your Best One But Again You've Got Too Much Filler Bro. Overall It Wasn't Bad But Just Like With Bleu I Felt Your Verse Could've Been A Lot Better. Overall Battle: I Felt Like Both Of You Could've Come A Lot Harder, Especially In A Tournament Where You're Battling Extremely Hard Competitors. I Expect To See Better Work From You Guy From Now On, No Offense. Fair's In. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-09-04 18:46:18

Very close battle one took this with a line i was feeling dope shit Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-09-04 21:42:19

I keep a silencer on the triangle THIS PISTOL WILL TORCH DYS hollows get 'thrown into funct way' then he die & harmonize with 'INVISIBLE FORCES!'/[Feng shui].. Bleu I don't know what ya old name was... but dope shit all around fammo... (now to the next verse) Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-09-04 23:07:00

Wait a sec I know ya’ll thought that MOVIE SCHEME WAS WILD but he’ll enjoy it more cuz it’s the one time BLEU’S SEEN WITH A TITLE! good flip to the scheme dys... I was about to get on you about that sshit until you flipped it a dope way... few things I wasn't feeling but i'ma leave that quiet... hit me up for a further expo fellas don't want to sway but the votes in. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-09-04 23:13:05