AfterThought vs J8E - Text Tournament Battle - Rap Battles and Freestyle Battles at LetsBeef.com


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Basic Text Tournament #12
Length: 12 Lines

AfterThought (93%) Won

Ranked #-- This Month (#64 All Time)

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Reppin: New York, United States

J8E (7%) Lost

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AfterThought

No, man. how you gon throw-jabs witcha HANDS UP IN YA PURSE. You can BANK THAT IM THE WORSE, catch '1000' bullets to 'RACK' YOU IN A HEARSE & these votes? You aint even gettin "One, K?" coz there was nothin 'GRAND' ABOUT YA VERSE!!!/ 
Turn ya good bitch to a 'wild animal' ready to 'BITE AWAY on the meat' LIKE A STEAK, go-hard & I won't-'pause', the bitch MIGHT GET RAPED. So when you ask her to compare YOU & ME, she'll say TRUTHFULLY that I'm much "Rawer" like noises a 'LION' MAKES!!!/
Feds hit em up 9 am, this CAT AH GET SIGNED. "9 PM He Already Undercover" like its PAST HIS BEDTIME!!!/ Should BACK OUT IF you CAN, COWARD. Might "Put A Hat On" to fuck ya bitch, then slide my "Fist Up" her ass & yell BLACK POWER!!!/ 
Show this hoe how the FO' TASTIN, SHORT RANGE & KOBAIN HIM. Prolly get smoked for ya GOLD CHAIN & ya WHOLE BANK IT's crazy, we'll "Take Your Cash" & "Empty Your Ice", might re-name my hood the ALS DOUGH NATION!!!!/

J8E

So 'shit stabber', You 'And 'Ass' Are An ANALOGY/ANAL-ORGY,'obliteration via alliteration' You'll get left with regrets and 'afterthoughts' now you've CHALLENGED-ME cos I'm gunna 'bring up points' & BURN you with APPARENT-BEEF that you 'can't handle', make you 'TURN'and get left in a 'state', i'm an 'ambassador' like ALLEN-KEYs/ALLAN-KEYES I'll prove to you that there's a 'screw loose' when i'm warring emCEES that's why i've got 'thousands of coins in my pockets' from 'CLASHING-Gs', I'll let you know I'ma switch my multi a bit so you don't think it's just RANDOM-SPEECH, I've gota genius MIND so tryna 'fight my flow is a constant CLIMB' like a SALMONS-LEAP, if LB 'followers' voted you, they'd be 'pulling the wool over truths eyes' like a PACK-OF-SHEEP, get ripped apart cos you couldn't 'think sharp' if I had a 'knife in your head' and the DAGGER-DEEP so I GUR-AN-TEE eye-will/I'LL 'bag' afterthoughts without a 'LACK-OF-SLEEP' when I take the "2 L's" and put em too his head like the wordplay in my last line without the 'APOST-ROPH-E' I hope you get ma-drift/adrift like your LOST-AT-SEA cos' If you realise the great lines inside my rhymes you'd know that I've BOSSED-THIS-GEEK I've 'left the crowd in amazement' ''mouths open', 'jaws hanging' like I've just ROBBED-THERE-CHEEKS.

Voting has ended for this battle (battle finished on 2014-09-04 12:02:42).

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One mad me laugh. The fairs in, Lads. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-09-04 16:10:44

NOBLE <FITTEST>	Both verses must be submitted by 11:59 PM EST (GMT -4) on September 4th. Good luck fellas! Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2014-09-01 14:33:34
AfterThought <CHALKLINED>	Goodluck J, let's get it. Posted on: 2014-09-01 16:41:53
J8E Basic Member	In the process of writing will have it submitted today.Good luck man. Posted on: 2014-09-04 08:31:52
J8E Basic Member	Can I have expo's I think it is needed to I can demonstrate my full potential. Posted on: 2014-09-04 11:38:57
TerraByte Basic Member	A pretty obvious winner for me. One was on a different level. My loser's attempts at wordplay and punches fell very flat, and a few times his homophone switches just weren't similar enough to be called anything but a stretch. Good try, and in terms of a beginner it's not awful, but his opponent was on a different level, even though he didn't try his best quite plainly. He didn't need to. Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2014-09-04 12:24:03
J8E Basic Member	Expo: And ass are an analogy..= alliteration and analogy mean similarity. .Points, turn/screw=allen keys ..also alan keyes was a usa 'state ambassador' thousands=gs and coins clash in pockets.. Eye/I bags = lack of sleep.. after the apostrophe in I'LL is 2 Ls... should get the rest .. als remember to vote because of metaphors/multis/voc abulary/punches etc.. vote on criteria! GL. Posted on: 2014-09-04 12:48:11
Dysfunctional <CLASSICK> Live Battler	So this was probably the bodybag of the round to be quite honest. My winner i think you rushed it didn't have enough bars and just said fuck it this'll do lol. My loser you gotta work one that wordplay some sound not even close to the same work on the wordplay sounding "exactly" the same as the other word ( might have worded that confusingly lol) Your punches fell flt too you gotta work on formatting the setups and the punch so you can get the full effect out of the concept you're working with. But I got my winner easy keep grinding im out Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2014-09-04 12:49:24
J1ZA Basic Member	my winner had better scheme, more inner and outer multies, i felt both could have had harder punches but my winner had a better structure, flow and rhymes.fv. Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2014-09-04 12:54:10
NOBLE <FITTEST>	Fair assessment. Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2014-09-04 13:06:48
OSKAR <CLASSICK>	Muuuurda Posted on: 2014-09-04 13:36:10
Phe <AC's>	CONCEALED VOTE.. Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2014-09-04 14:27:33
LiLBearMuahfuga	Sometimes you get b slapped with blah bars Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2014-09-04 16:54:53
COFFIN DODGER	yeah , clear winner for obvious reasons . loser wasn't bad , just keep practicing n improving .. Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2014-09-04 19:19:51
CSKiLLz <SSG>	Seen alot better from one but the vote is in goodluck to both Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2014-09-04 19:42:05
Shodan One Bar Champion	Just cosign what everyone else here has said. One didn't try too hard, but he didn't need to. I don't feel like a major expo is warranted, but if either of you want one, ask and ye shall receive. 5-4. Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2014-09-04 20:47:13
ILLoKWENT <DGAF> Hall Of Famer LBT Legend Concept Champion	Ones just more polished in flow and scheme work.. Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2014-09-04 23:15:41
J8E Basic Member	Oi btw so people don't think being an idiot my not voting for other people in the tournament it's because I don't have any VP. so no point lol. Posted on: 2014-09-05 02:59:16