The fairs in, lads. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-09-04 16:07:10

Both verses must be submitted by 11:59 PM EST (GMT -4) on September 4th. Good luck fellas! Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-09-01 14:33:02

Both came below average to be honest. My winner got this just based off consistency and a smoother read. My loser work on not forcing your angles/wordplay as much as you did GL to whoever moves on it was pretty close tbh. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-09-03 15:39:49

One was more solid all the way through, but could definitely still work on many aspects of their game. Overall though, the winner had better flow and punches. Some concepts hit and some flopped, but the winner had more relevant ones IMO. Votes in... Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-09-03 17:18:17

Nice battle. Phenomonon: I felt like you had some good ideas that were set back because you had a sprinkling of filler throughout your verse. You also had this bar, which puts me off of your verse: "this heaven sent CHICKS GETTING BY ME? no!! he's a 'noobie n god dis' crews slow fa thinking 'this BITCH IS ALMIGHTY' (Nubian goddess)" Nubian Goddess crews makes no grammatical sense - in other words, the wordplay doesn't work both ways. The punches thrown were solid, but nothing great. Overall, your biggest problem is that you left some empty room in the bottom of your box. SuperGuy: I fucking shook my head at that opener, but after that you trailed off horribly. Black/back out? What the fuck are you even on? You know better than to do shit like that. The punches thrown were decent, but your opener was the only thing that stood out. The rhymes also started to feel forced and unnatural after it. I could do a bar-by-bar breakdown, but I don't like doing that shit in the text box because it gets crammed together. Basically, this battle boils down to whether or not an overall inferior verse can be saved by a good opener, and I'm leaning this way... 6-6. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-09-03 18:39:22

This was a sick battle my winner just edged it with the punches fv no hate Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-09-03 21:51:29

One was slightly stronger in concepts. The other seemed more focused on flow and multis. Fairs. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-09-03 21:57:06

fair one is in gents Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-09-03 22:24:36

dope breakdown @OCTAVIA.. anyway, comes down to who had better angles, although a few made me cringe and lacked anything too clever... but did the job nonetheless Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-09-04 02:07:25

my winner edged this with slightly better punches and a better flow Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-09-04 10:05:03

Octavia gave the only breakdown I feel could suit this battle both had below average bouts. One was just more polished in the arts and craft getting an easy win while having more punches. IMO fair vote is dropped. Both can for better i have seen both do better just wasn't a fan of one's wording. Flow to the winner and keep elevating to both. Also God Bless from the "Hart " Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-09-04 11:10:30

What noble said because it's true. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-09-04 16:57:11

The fair's in. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-09-04 17:15:04

not going to be redundant but agree with what octavia has typed up as an expo...def step it up next round to the winner Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-09-04 18:20:04

yeah was a real close battle , but seen both do a lot better . everything that needs to be said already has been , so my vote goes to.. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-09-04 19:16:28

I felt one went a little harder imo fairs always in goodluck to both Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-09-04 19:35:57