Might have to turn mine up a lil bit... Wasn't able to "shout" due to asshole house mates crying an shit. Posted on: 2014-07-20 16:38:35

That day....that day was the day of my 18th birthday Unknown to me, as i awoke from my sleep but i was going to celebrate that day in the worst way/ unawre of the storm that was to come to fate thought i was in for the usual birthaday trait with a hug n a kiss, few gifts an a slice of cake/ So got dressed an rushed down the stairs Like Hell yeah, i'm 18 who cares? Only to be greeted by frowns an stares/ Two men in unifrom sat on the chairs/ Sipping their tea an smiling at me Mother with tears, in her eyes, Pleaing for them to leave me be Father with a look of fear in his eyes/ Seeing, free is something i'll never be/ Sgt stands up an say's they've come for me i'm Not to be worried, i'm joining a new family Where i'll live happily and comfortably, how the 2nd battalion is the only company/ That'll i ever need/ Then he proceeds, to inform me i'll get 3 square meals a day as he ushers me out the door, My mothers grip slips away knowing i'm on my way to war/ Hopping into the back of the jeep Mother drops to the ground in a heap/ Reality come's crashing down on me, That i'm Expected to kill people that i've never even seen/ All that goes through my head is, this reaks of pure evil/ Thoughts interupted by the corporal, “Now you know that you've got to earn your keep for our country to be free You've got to fight so that future generation's won't have to”/ All i can think of while we travel, if i and the many others like me fight an die, what future do our generation's have though? The seriouness of the situation start tah weight heavy as we pull up to the harbor/ I see lines of fellows, just like me on towards deaths destination in a mad panic, i can't have it thinking if i survive this crap my birthday will forever be tainted bitter/ As Sgt marches us up the ramp Like a lion amputee, he grunts an roars with no pause/ now i'm leaving behind the shores of more as i'm shipping of to war/ Posted on: 2014-07-20 16:39:46

Both verses due by 18th of July 23:59. Failure to post will result in an infraction without legitimate reasons. Topic: Shipping Off To War. Good luck to both. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-07-15 14:54:24

24hr extension. Due by Saturday 19th. Further rounds will allow 4 days to post, 3 days of voting. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-07-18 07:04:14

Tried playing it, neither verse plays. Posted on: 2014-07-21 15:45:37

Dayummmmmmmm Goodness went the FUCK IN!!!!! This was a straight murderrrrrr up in here...up in here. Good shit from 2Full too i suppose Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-07-28 10:00:10

One stuck to the topic, the other didnt. ~1~ Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-07-28 15:56:02

Ohh shit! 2fuel on the mic! Good battle guys.. I listened a few times to come up with my decision! Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-07-30 00:02:08

Honestly, both had elements in their verses that I liked, but I can't go past the fact that one was more on topic than the other. If both had been on topic to the same degree, then I could have measured and compared some of those other elements..but this is a Topical so fair is tossed. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-07-30 02:44:23

Both had great writing, but one stuck to the topic. RESPECT 2 both as always, FV in. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2014-07-30 14:19:18