Kingz Shit Let's go Eloh Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2013-09-09 07:53:57

soal got this shit in a body bag Posted on: 2013-09-10 03:18:07

My vote incognito for my winner like caked said come more out of the box and throw a nice name flip in there and working on 3-5 syllables throughout the whole verse. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2013-09-11 21:37:10

The S.O.A.L. train coming through. Posted on: 2013-09-12 00:17:55

.::S O A L::. the start off was real basic just a couple of rhymes nothing major that sticks, I feel you couldve made a much better punch with the "arm tatted" concept that couldve had a stronger impact to your opp, the verse is on a slight incline after that with the etched in darkness it's not big but it's better than the previous lines, you could of created something crazier with the king of queens personal it was a nice angle with a ehh okay kinda outcome, the wording started getting sloppy'r thru out the next couple bars and your closer was real basic .::ELOH::. alright angle from the start slight wording issues and u just ain't capture the approach you had set out 100%, broke AC's line could been much doper but it was nice you just gotta set up slightly stronger but that line made me chuckle so u get pts. for that, you keep a real basic couple scheme's going nothing as good as ya previous 2 bars, that see saw kids are just playing couldve came out much better also but nice angle ..... Yall both got some work to do I see yall have concepts and approaches but yall just don't fully display what you tryna get through in the greatest way, just work on mastering the punchlines and wording and yall gon be soon to elevate, I got my eye's open for you two: Fair votes in #PLg Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2013-09-12 00:55:44

not bad from both fairs in no h8 Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2013-09-12 03:36:41

one had this from the jump Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2013-09-12 09:56:51

LIKED THA BROKE AC's LINE COULDA BEEN BETTER BUT STILL I LIKED IT, SAME WIT THA ELOH BACKWARDS IS HOLE LINE I LIKED THAT CONCEPT BUT YOU COULDA DONE WAYYYYYY MORE WITH IT...... I GOTS A WINNER HERE IT WOZ A NICE LIL PERSONAL BATTLE....... MY FAIRS IN. holla Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2013-09-12 11:43:38

one used played lines that have been used before and the other came with decent bars but was very basic.. winners gonna have to step it up tho. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2013-09-12 15:15:41

Tough one to call. Fairs in though fellas. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2013-09-14 05:31:30

S O A L got Put2Sleep twice... I got your number homie, good shit though. You next Lock Posted on: 2013-09-14 10:43:01