PLEASE HAVE YOUR VERSES IN BY SUNDAY 2nd JUNE @ 23:59 GMT......ROUND WILL CLOSE WEDNESDAY 5th JUNE @ 23:59 GMT...... YOUR SCHEME WILL BE POSTED BELOW... Posted on: 2013-05-29 18:36:24

PARANORMAL ABDUCTION Posted on: 2013-05-29 18:36:44

ah. Posted on: 2013-05-29 19:27:31

Good job X, congrats for making it to the semi final. You deserve to be here Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2013-05-30 01:58:38

^^lol...no comment but APOCALYPSE in this bitch Posted on: 2013-05-30 06:55:35

bashed/ Posted on: 2013-05-30 15:55:13

phil collins.. lord i feel this shit in tha air. Posted on: 2013-06-01 18:09:28

Lets get those fairs in ..... Posted on: 2013-06-02 14:30:19

posting like a champ. Posted on: 2013-06-02 14:38:49

Killed'em.. Posted on: 2013-06-02 14:42:37

WHAT IS IT??? APOCALYPSE!!!!! GOOD SHIT BRO's Posted on: 2013-06-02 14:52:50

LMFAO @ GRIZZ's FIRST LINE...... THATS WHAT I TAUGHT HIM lol Posted on: 2013-06-02 14:53:38

Fairs in. Not as good as it should be. This is a let down battle by both sides. But there can only be 1 winner, Votes in. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2013-06-02 15:35:18

good effort by both.. alot of forced multis by both.. but thats expected with a complex scheme.. i went for the relavency in setups combined wit concepts that made slightly better sense. rather than focus solely on simply scheme.. because although its a scheme tourney.. its still a battle that should exhibit all elements.generous rates for a hard multi. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2013-06-02 17:04:02

fairs in .. fellahs good battle tho Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2013-06-02 17:11:31

Thanks for your time Jason .... Interesting read and valid points ..... @Ill how you not going to vote regarding the scheme when it's a scheme tourney ... That one just went over my head to as how you have justified your vote ... But it's wateva I guess .... Posted on: 2013-06-02 18:34:35

@x.. reread what i wrote.. i didnt focus SOLELY on scheme usage as my reasoning..its a combination of everything..anybody can make the multis completely match and fuck everything else.. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2013-06-02 19:35:12

Ight @ill I get you fam just misunderstood what you where saying I guess ... Posted on: 2013-06-03 03:01:09

quite a tough scheme to keep going consistent throughout an entire verse and i felt both strayed a bit at times. that being said, one did put on a better show and used his schemes more effectively in terms of turning them into better punches. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2013-06-03 10:03:14

one had more creative and less played material here and got my vote Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2013-06-04 10:00:55

I thought one was a little smoother and was more entertaining here for real. Fairs in. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2013-06-04 10:42:08

Fantastic schemework from both. Fair is in Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2013-06-04 11:02:06

both had their own projection of the multi which was cool, so there wasn't much of the same scheme over and over which was cool, i felt one's content, conceptually and punch wise was better than their opponent's while the loser here had a little better flow but punch wise and concept wise could not match up, gb tho fellas fair is in, whyte is out Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2013-06-04 11:22:03

I enjoyed reading both verses. The scheme was tough, but you both came decent with it. You both had some iffy wording at times, but overall, my winner had a cleaner use of the scheme and some punches that hit a bit harder. Fair proclamation. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2013-06-04 12:33:41

Fair is in. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2013-06-04 13:36:08

Bit played and sloppy in places, bit forced and completely unnatural but I know that scheme tournaments are really restrictive so it's hard to avoid and both writers did well within those restrictions so good job, clear winner to me though. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2013-06-04 18:24:13

Fairs in fellas. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2013-06-05 02:52:31