Please have your verses in by the 7th of March to prevent getting disqualified. Posted on: 2013-03-02 13:50:34

this gonna be good imma start writing right now Posted on: 2013-03-02 14:05:28

Ateleron had some stretched bars while disposition's verse actually flowed very nicely. Sounded more like cyphering on a beat though. My vote goes to the person who stayed consistent throughout with the level of punches and concepts. They will really need to step it up a notch if they wanna progress much further though. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2013-03-04 09:36:12

winner jus drown'd his opponent wit' salivated punches no h8 fairs in Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2013-03-04 10:21:07

ima keep it to myself. but both needs to step it up a lil if they plan on making it past the 2nd round. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2013-03-04 10:57:30

Ateleron: A very poor verse here. I seemed as though you tried a new style but it came of very forced and awkward. The opener was a decent jab but the majority of the rest was very bad. The figure of speech bar had potential but was poorly worded. The only highly was the 'Accidental anal' bar which was a simple but effective nameplay. Tourneys arent great places to try new styles out, you might be better off re-examining your writtens if you progress further. ===== Disposition: I didnt count one punchline in your whole verse. You need to practice crafting and creating punchlines. Your multis was fairly solid early on, but using one syllable rhymes will not cut it at any level above poor. Work on the basics fam! ===== Overall: One sided almost by default. Telly you have a chance this tournament to begin ascending to the position you'd like to achieve but you really need to reassess your style and content. Dispo you need to take from this expierence and elevate at the battling fundamentals. Fairs in. 1/ Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2013-03-04 11:10:56

smh. votin like a champ. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2013-03-04 12:29:54

generous tho. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2013-03-04 12:30:50

nothin too impressive on either side but i got a winner Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2013-03-04 13:53:08

one was to simple, the other I felt just tried to hard and it took a lot away from some of the concepts they tried in there bars, had some decent flips but tighten them concepts up and smooth that flow out, got my winner here tho, fairs in Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2013-03-04 14:08:00

Read the Expo the Scorpion's Harpoon line was about the scorpion move where he says get over here. It's called a harpoon and in order to use it you press back twice and press the punch button good spar though Posted on: 2013-03-04 14:22:59

LCee Goon In!! lmao Posted on: 2013-03-04 14:32:34

ehhh......GOoN.ZOo concealed vote--- Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2013-03-04 15:05:09

We're talkin 8.50 vs. 8.51, one was streched, but had good punchlines, one was decent on punchlines and flowed. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2013-03-04 15:34:40

I agree with what RULE and Fame said. One cyphered and one has the idea of what they need to do but there execution is so shitty. Plain and simple... Fair is in. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2013-03-04 19:31:52

I expected more out of this. Loser had a simple verse, did little to no damage to his opponent and didnt impress at all. Had decent flow at times but simple rhymes and lacked in most areas. Winner had a lot of stretched multis, bogus and unnecessary wordplay and some of the most played concepts you can bring. Not tryin to sway but PM if you want further explanations, cuz I know y'all probably aint tryin to hear this. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2013-03-04 21:17:52

the way one verse took off in here ud of thought..but wellwellwell now..i gotta read read um both a 3rd time..hold on..(seconds later) one came with medium punches tho clever concepts and multies...throught the whole verse..one didn't carry to the finsh..IMO Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2013-03-04 21:19:26

Good Battle At not your best but apparently enough to take this haha no h8 but I disagree with rule who said I had no punches and people who said it was a cypher type verse like people telling me that Ididn't have the skills so I came more lyrical at parts and tried to up the flow haha get out of here with that cypher shit. Posted on: 2013-03-04 23:04:00

accepting a loss? ok thenUNC..if u say so..theres always an underdog...not that im sayin u are one..jus sayin don't give up hope..least not for the future..but bout ya verse..first rhyme was pretty good..but it was jus a multi rhyme scheme..the multies concept may have matched each multi but the concept of the bar in a whole didn't match..let the concept flow down the river til the end jus change the current? but UNSCIOUSNESS/WONKA SHIT..HOPE HES IN (for a)nopey..mistake..lo ok=SPAR SOON/SCORPIONS( ? ) HARPOON..then the rest jus plan fell off..id say ur opening line should at least been ur ending..Ateleron: HAPPY TO 'ROLL' GREAT/GRATE(like we wouldn't have understood the simplicity behind the wordplay..lol..but syllable wise harASSIN THE COLE GATE? like wtf bro..BATTLE HATIN/SLAP THIS FAKE W/ MATCH TO SATIN..ect..the readibilty even with flow if u don't spell the slang term we educated voters are gunna READ AS IS..jus tossed sum breakdowns in there to help with uneducated voters to see that flaws don't mean a verse is fully weak..cuz when one sense quitsa workin others get stronger..peace Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2013-03-05 00:19:43

I thought one should have came a lot harder being that this is a tourney and all, i aint tryna talk shit but i didnt expect such a weak verse from him, that being said, i reckon he got the win anyway.. the other verse was just too basic. it wasnt bad, had a good flow and some nice mutlis in there at times, but the punches werent very strong. FV all day fellas Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2013-03-05 01:09:55

CONCEALED VOTE.. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2013-03-05 03:06:55

Disposition: Magazine Line Was Nice; You're Better Than This Though. No Vote. Posted on: 2013-03-05 09:33:06

Fairs in. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2013-03-05 15:43:09

gb. Fairs in men. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2013-03-05 18:23:43

SEEMS LIKE DISPOSITIONS VERSE WOZ WRITTEN BY LIKE 4 DIFFERENT PPL, FIRST BAR WOZ BASIC MULTI AFTER BASIC MULTI LIKE 'LIGHT SHOTS' 'FIGHT COPS' THEN IT TURNED INTO SOME NICE MULTIs WIT A CLEVER TWIST ON THA 'MAGAZINE' CONCEPT, THEN LIKE THA NEXT 3 BARS AFTER THAT NO MULTIS AT ALL JUS RHYMIN 'DRIVE' WIT 'LINES' AND 'LIFE' WTF????? WHY WOULD SOMEONE WHO CAN MULTI RHYME THEN CHOOSE TO NOT MULTI RHYME????? VERY CONFUSED......ATELER ON CAME VERY LIGHT WIT SOME REAL WEAK WORDPLAYS (lol) THEY'RE LIKE THA ONES I USE IN MY SNIPES FAM haha, STILL THO YOU HAD SOME NICE LINES HERE AN THERE LIKED THA 'DRUGGIES WHO STEAL' PART.....YOU NEED TO GO OLD SKOOL FOR ROUND 2 FAMS......FAIRS IN NUFF SAID. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2013-03-05 18:58:51

Vote Is Dropped Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2013-03-05 21:27:42

Concepts on both sides were all over the place and lacked clean conversions for the most part of both verses. I felt one was a tad more established and readable. Vitty's vote's in. Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2013-03-06 12:41:57

winner here did just enuf to squeeze by.. alot of played concepts .some were a bit corny.. scheme was fairly decent tho.. loser lacked punch strength and consistent rhyme complexity..setups were weak on both parties.fairs in Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2013-03-07 04:18:02