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Topical Tournament #5
Length: 40 Lines

Revan (71%) Won

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-Dru- (29%) Lost

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Reppin: Birmingham, England, United Kingdom

Revan

                                                              Reading From A Script
                                                    Chapter One: Afterbirth's Afterbirth

Knee's elevated, screams escalated cause he's penetrated the exit of the womb. Five minutes, he's estimated to be celebrated soon. She's medicated but has demonstrated that she's a dedicate troop. Here he comes! A healthy human being, she's excelled at truly breeding a..... . A room filled with ten mouths falls as silent as death, but the irony's left as they scoop up her son, his face met a violent impact, his left side is a mess... he's crying and stressed but hear's silence in fact. They later find that he's deaf in one side, his mother smothers him as tears slowly crept from her eyes. A trickle, a stream, a splash, a squirt, She screamed and pleas and asks the church but concedes that she must be damned and cursed because she'd failed her seed so soon afterbirth.

                                       Chapter Two: The Teenage Comprehension Compilation   

He turned his head to the left, leaving his right ear exposed. Thats the side that all questions on life can oppose his psyche and soul. He'd been asked to relax and recite all he's known from his life as he's grown. He breathed in, and then proceeded. He spoke about being punched in the head, stomach and nose, being dragged into a bathroom, head getting flushed in a bowl. Being alone with a girl for the first time and as he stared in her eyes he prematurely ejaculated like american pie. He spoke about having his dollars stole and the time he broke his collarbone. About how he needed to relieve his bowels at school and the kids burst in and took pictures while he sat in the stool. He told how he had no goals, no friends, and no hope for them. the look on his virgin face was a nervous state, as he understood his certain fate and merely yearned to learn his fate.  

                                                  Chapter Three: Failing At Failing

Fuck life. For real he's looking for... the pills. The pills. The pills he took them all. He felt drunken. His face twitched in a crazy state. Fuck just pills. He sliced his wrists with a razor blade. His mother found him.... and she clowned him. "You foolish boy!" she'd spit at him. That blade is blunt, and those pills were vitamins. Suicide's considered a failure, and he'd failed to fail at life. He screamed for the end to come, his words directed to the sky...

                                                                     Epilogue

The laugher was thunderous. At the same time mankind heard thunder burst. The laughter screeched a high pitched cackle. At the same time mankind saw lightning crackle. Jesus turned to his father, watching the tears fall down his cheeks, God had fallen to the floor, he'd lost the feeling in his knees. Father and son roared at the hilarity, while earth saw showers creep through the clouds. Jesus studied the show before him, the human animation. The entertainment his father created while they were bored and grew impatient. "The vitamins were priceless!" Jesus roared at his fathers side. God composed himself from laughter, and suddenly replied "You take the next twenty years of animation of his life."

-Dru-

Animation

He was an only child, he never took the centre stage up,
22 but never had the same mental age as men that age have,
Put pen to paper as a ventilator,
And would draw for hours just for entertainment.
No father to guide him, a bastard raised kid,
Castigated for not passing when his class was graded,
But art was his life, it had him fascinated,
And that's the way he'd pass the days with,
Comic book drawings, pastilles, paintings,
His mom ascertained it had to take him
To a place where he was no longer masquerading,
His feelings were on paper, animated.
His mom was offered a job in a new town, she procrastinated,
Then after ages decided that she had to take it,
He had a new life, finally his past had faded,
The memory of his school life, he at last erased it.
His neighbour was polite and pretty, showing common courtesy 
She'd say hi, but he'd never communicate with her verbally,
He heard her speak and tried to move his mouth to get the words to leave,
But they never would, he'd just stare back nervously then turn and flee.
She told her boyfriend, "the new neighbour is freaking me out"
"I frequently shout hi if I see him about"
"Try to talk to him if i see him when I'm leaving the house" 
"And he just looks at me like he don't know what I'm speaking about"
Trying to rectify the situation, he worked hard just to undo,
The way that she felt about him, he spotted art in her front room,
His dream to communicate with her started to come true,
It beat so loud that his heart was a drum tune.
That night with her boyfriend sleeping, she woke him,
Somebody sneaking, creeping, had broke in,
He went down armed, not to speak to the bloke n,
No questions, his gun barrel was weeping and smoking.
As the thief lay motionless, bleeding, they knew then,
Many words crossed through their mind, but few said,
They realised who was lying there in their room dead,
It was their neighbour with a drawing of them both, titled new friends.

Voting has ended for this battle (battle finished on 2012-12-02 19:31:37).

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AfterThought <CHALKLINED>	Claaaaaaaassick! Posted on: 2012-11-26 13:46:26
Erupt da Monsta <LoD> 2x Hall of Famer Grand Champion Premier League Champion Topical Champion Tag Team Champion LBA Champion	Topic : Animation / Goodluck to both you niggs! Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2012-11-26 14:30:46
Revan <iRULE> Hall Of Famer Grand Champion Topical Champion	Good luck Dru. #CLASSICK Posted on: 2012-11-26 15:25:53
-Dru- Exclusive Member	Good luck bruv Posted on: 2012-12-02 19:33:41
Black Book <GSchemeSho>	This was a great battle! I loved both of the endings. I'm leaning one way just because the other had to many low points where I felt not much was being accomplished. And I personally just liked the other person's better. It flowed nicer and was worded very well. Both did their thing though. Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2012-12-02 21:04:17
Erupt da Monsta <LoD> 2x Hall of Famer Grand Champion Premier League Champion Topical Champion Tag Team Champion LBA Champion	Ait ima keep it 100 so the winner doesnt get the wrong idea from the comments..... this battle wasnt great... I expected alot more tbh... the flows were good, boarderline average, and the storylines were really vauge, I dont think either of you utilizes enuff poetic techniques here.... the vocab was also elementary... But one edged here, wasnt by much.... To whoever wins... this is constructive talk.... PICK IT UP. goodluck... peace Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2012-12-03 11:13:12
Erupt da Monsta <LoD> 2x Hall of Famer Grand Champion Premier League Champion Topical Champion Tag Team Champion LBA Champion	............... Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2012-12-03 11:13:59
NOBLE <FITTEST> Staff Hall Of Famer	Both were nice, but I personally got more entertainment from one verse. Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2012-12-03 11:54:50
Student Staff Hall of Famer LB Historian LetsBeef Patriarch Creative Genius	I Expect More From Both TBPH. I Felt One Was Deep But At Times It Felt Like They Were Just Rhyming "Big Words" Together (No Hate) For The Most Part They Got Their Point Across Though So Props For That. Other Was Good But I Felt His Storytelling Wasn't Really On Point. At Parts I Felt There Was Just Too Much Redundancy And Creatively It Could've Been Better Too. Fair's In Fellas, Nice Reads Here. -Student Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2012-12-03 13:58:20
Phil Banks <LoD> Hall Of Famer 2x Grand Champion Scheme Champion Live Battler Discord Battler	he doomed LoD Posted on: 2012-12-03 14:02:19
mister jon flako Premium Member The Drunken Sober One	nice readings,,pretty well written i say,,good shit,,diamond both..comment in Posted on: 2012-12-03 16:11:20
Savage Capone <BFNE>	one was a much better read then the other... props to both for getting this far..... fv Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2012-12-03 17:10:04
Dirty Work <AC's>	Both were tyte but this is a fairly easy choice for me. it pains me a little to vote against one, because his ending kinda tugged my heart, it was pretty sick, i loved it, but overall his approach to the topic was a little to loose while my winner took a crazy approach that ended up being pretty epic. My winner also had some better flow and schemes FV all day yall Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2012-12-03 21:49:48
Apollyon <AC's>	CONCEALED VOTE.. Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2012-12-04 00:04:00