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Topical Tournament #5
Length: 40 Lines

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                                                Time's Up: The Story Of A Failure

             Strange... The lights fading and im facing an eternity of darkness for being heartless
           But that remark is not what it first appears to be, its weird you see im merely free of pain 
                   partly because my arteries deserted me and personally im certainly ashamed
    because im the person to be blamed. But my unhealthy lifestyle now has me perfectly acclaimed
    as the creator of time travel because the nerves within my brain has sent me swerving on a plane.
      First i see my birth, weird how i never envisioned it before. My mother screaming from her jaw
 My father hand being squeezed until its raw. I cried but never thought a thought, distraught as i fought
                to adapt to this new world, this new sight, a new life. Fast forward a little bit...
          The light fades and reappears like a dimmer switch with a little twist. And im five, a little kid
   eating dinner with my fingers. Its a cheese sandwich with no crusts, i smash it, make my jaw crush
                 empty the crisps packet, eat the doughnut and tell my dad that now im full up.
    Another jump, now im eleven. Trying to speak but i cant finish a sentence. Im looking at a crowd
  who frown and whimper when i lessen the speech im given from the reverend. Oh this was when i was
                                       given brutal lessons in the city known as heaven. 
 Im stood at my brothers side, we're here because my mother died. A disease in the genes of the children 
     on my mothers side. The tears appear inside my fathers eyes, and as i fear the fear thats now inside
                    that it appears its clear he'd rather die, my mind goes on another ride.
                                Im seventeen, in the bedroom of Jennifer Hinchcliffe. 
  She's lying on the bed, with all my lies within her head, i love her eyes is what i said but i just want to 
      dive between her legs. I think she can sense it, so before she can mention, i decided to test it.
I pout on her legs, until she's tensing. Then i french kiss her clenched lips, the ones right by her fresh hips.
                         the move next is protection but she questions my methods.  
 Ten minutes later and ive failed what i now know was a rape attempt. I wanted her so badly with such
                       great intent at any cost but became an animal with no muzzle on.
  My mind illuminates another path, im thirty eight and truly sad, overweight, and i smooth and grab my 
  crude moustache. I pick out the food i find incrusted in, finish the hamburger i was munching, then inhale 
                   the smell of my mustard breath when a pain takes me, makes me clutch my chest.
                                                                 and here we are. 
 
                                                        My life has been a complete failure. 
                      So you can understand how im baffled that my mind discovered time travel.
                                                    But i'll die like i lived, a vagrant, a reject. 
                        As a man who discovered time travel when no-one was around to see it.

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AfterThought <CHALKLINED>	Topic: Time Travel. Goodluck to both of you! Posted on: 2012-11-04 12:38:18
Aggo <AC's> One Bar Champion Tag Team Champion	Whats goin on here? And why is rule no longer the opponant? TF? Posted on: 2012-11-10 14:52:22
Revan <iRULE> Hall Of Famer Grand Champion Topical Champion	Revan = RULE. Good luck Incept. Posted on: 2012-11-10 16:00:22
Aggo <AC's> One Bar Champion Tag Team Champion	Reppin SOR but fuck Revan, that shit was awesome. Posted on: 2012-11-10 18:35:04
Savage Capone <BFNE>	some pretty good shit here, but one took this with glorious imagery.... no h8 at all to the opponent of the emcee i picked, but it just wasnt there for me with your drop.... good shit though.... FV IS IN!!!! Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2012-11-10 19:05:54
reEFer <Hoodrich> Hall Of Famer Grand Champion	better topical verse Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2012-11-10 19:16:46
AfterThought <CHALKLINED>	Claaaaaaaaaassick! Posted on: 2012-11-11 02:24:00
Phil Banks <LoD> Hall Of Famer 2x Grand Champion Scheme Champion Live Battler Discord Battler	yeah uhhh 1 sided Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2012-11-11 07:28:56
Apollyon <AC's>	CONCEALED VOTE.. Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2012-11-11 12:14:19
ILLoKWENT <DGAF> Hall Of Famer LBT Legend Concept Champion	ones a lil more thought out ideawise Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2012-11-11 12:19:14
stricc <LoD> Hall Of Famer 2x Video Battle Champion Grand Champion Live Battler Discord Battler	good battle but clear winner Voted: Yes (Hidden) Posted on: 2012-11-11 12:20:55

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