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10-03-2011, 03:35 PM
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Rhyming Scheme/Flow: Mikey, Ill had multis for days but it knocked the flow a tad. Mikey was a smooth reading all the way through.
Vocabulary: Phenom, felt his vivid descriptions encapsulated his story better and inevitably gave it more "Ummf"
Topic/Meaning: Phenom, easily IMO. Mikey had a niice read no doubt. But, it lacked that poetic feel to it. Where phenom had that covered basically the whole time
Storytelling/Progression: This was close, Phenom. By a hair i give it to illy, because i dont know about yins but i really enjoyed mikeys piece. but felt phenoms had more depth which lead to a more pleasureable read.
Emotion: Phenom. felt it was just rawer and more powerful in all emotional aspects. mikey had a running to win this catagory but showed up a little short in my eyes. Reading it seems Ill spent a tad more time perfecting it.
Imagery: Phenom, he painted a vivid picture line after line. Mikey had the story going, but lacked that poetic luster.
Poetic Techniques: Phenom, as i said in my last explanation. To me Mikey lacked that poetic lust that drives these topicals. His story to me was more comedic than deep. Flowed preicsly but didn't habe the content to take this catagory.
Ending: Phenom, his had a deep underlying meaning which is unveiled to the reader at the end. Where mikey had a dope ending but it seemed more trackish then topicalish to me. Good reads on both sides fellows but....
MVGT: Ill Phenom
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Rhyming Scheme/Flow: Mikey, Ill had multis for days but it knocked the flow a tad. Mikey was a smooth reading all the way through.
Vocabulary: Phenom, felt his vivid descriptions encapsulated his story better and inevitably gave it more "Ummf"
Topic/Meaning: Phenom, easily IMO. Mikey had a niice read no doubt. But, it lacked that poetic feel to it. Where phenom had that covered basically the whole time
Storytelling/Progression: This was close, Phenom. By a hair i give it to illy, because i dont know about yins but i really enjoyed mikeys piece. but felt phenoms had more depth which lead to a more pleasureable read.
Emotion: Phenom. felt it was just rawer and more powerful in all emotional aspects. mikey had a running to win this catagory but showed up a little short in my eyes. Reading it seems Ill spent a tad more time perfecting it.
Imagery: Phenom, he painted a vivid picture line after line. Mikey had the story going, but lacked that poetic luster.
Poetic Techniques: Phenom, as i said in my last explanation. To me Mikey lacked that poetic lust that drives these topicals. His story to me was more comedic than deep. Flowed preicsly but didn't habe the content to take this catagory.
Ending: Phenom, his had a deep underlying meaning which is unveiled to the reader at the end. Where mikey had a dope ending but it seemed more trackish then topicalish to me. Good reads on both sides fellows but....
MVGT: Ill Phenom
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10-04-2011, 12:25 PM
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I was going to vote. then I started laughing at Mikeys "wtf is that?" and "Oh I thought it was a heart" comments. Then I realized me n Mikey both Alpha. So I can't vote. And even If I am allowed. I wouldn't fel comfortable doing so. G/L fellas
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10-04-2011, 12:25 PM
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I was going to vote. then I started laughing at Mikeys "wtf is that?" and "Oh I thought it was a heart" comments. Then I realized me n Mikey both Alpha. So I can't vote. And even If I am allowed. I wouldn't fel comfortable doing so. G/L fellas
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10-04-2011, 12:39 PM
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Dammit!! Jus..  
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10-04-2011, 12:39 PM
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Dammit!! Jus..
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10-04-2011, 02:37 PM
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Rhyming Scheme/Flow- Mikey (Edged)
Vocabulary- Flow
Topic/Meaning- Flow (Edged)
Storytelling/Progression- Flow (Edged)
Emotion- Flow
Imagery- Flow
Poetic Techniques- Flow
Ending- Flow (Edged)
The catagories make it look much more clear cut than it actually was. Both pieces overall were really great, and this is by far the bst battle of the tourney so far. But the catagories have spoken.
MVGT: IAmFlow.
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10-04-2011, 02:37 PM
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Rhyming Scheme/Flow- Mikey (Edged)
Vocabulary- Flow
Topic/Meaning- Flow (Edged)
Storytelling/Progression- Flow (Edged)
Emotion- Flow
Imagery- Flow
Poetic Techniques- Flow
Ending- Flow (Edged)
The catagories make it look much more clear cut than it actually was. Both pieces overall were really great, and this is by far the bst battle of the tourney so far. But the catagories have spoken.
MVGT: IAmFlow.
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10-04-2011, 06:04 PM
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Lol y did he vote for iamflow lol
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10-04-2011, 06:04 PM
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Lol y did he vote for iamflow lol
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10-04-2011, 06:09 PM
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I am flow.
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10-04-2011, 06:09 PM
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I am flow.
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Originally Posted by Intricate_Skillz
Rhyming Scheme/Flow-i think both were good here, it was close in this cata, so this is a tie
Vocabulary- phe got this cata, md didnt have many things that stood out.
Topic/Meaning- imma go with phe on this one also....i feel he was closer to the topic meaning. thoughh i liked MD's angle of it.
Storytelling/Progression-this was a tie...both told nice storys...
Emotion- this was a tie also...both showed alot of emotion here....
Imagery- this also was a tie....i got good images from both emotional aspects.
Poetic Techniques- i feel phe takes this cata, his was more poetic imo...
Ending- i feel like MD's ending was ehhh, phes ending was ok, so tie
mvgt PHENOM
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Co-sign this one hunnid.
Mvgt Ill.
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Originally Posted by Intricate_Skillz
Rhyming Scheme/Flow-i think both were good here, it was close in this cata, so this is a tie
Vocabulary- phe got this cata, md didnt have many things that stood out.
Topic/Meaning- imma go with phe on this one also....i feel he was closer to the topic meaning. thoughh i liked MD's angle of it.
Storytelling/Progression-this was a tie...both told nice storys...
Emotion- this was a tie also...both showed alot of emotion here....
Imagery- this also was a tie....i got good images from both emotional aspects.
Poetic Techniques- i feel phe takes this cata, his was more poetic imo...
Ending- i feel like MD's ending was ehhh, phes ending was ok, so tie
mvgt PHENOM
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Co-sign this one hunnid.
Mvgt Ill.
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10-04-2011, 10:02 PM
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Oooo i didnt know lol
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