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Unread 06-15-2017, 10:10 AM
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Exclamation Nicholas a top tier? LMFAO What A Joke!

Lmao dude is garbage, here is his 16 vs Shodan in which he got ethered

if you take shots, you'll get "tore-so" you aint CLUTCHING THE WEAPONS IN WARZONES but go ahead "get it off your chest" like GULLIVER WRECKING THE SMALL ROPES and "choose your thick skull over your heart again" but you ain't The PUNISHER CHECKING HIS WARDROBE!!

^^Ok first of all, the tore-so wordplay sounds perfect annunciation wise but it doesnt make sense both ways grammatically. Isnt that the point of wordplay? "You'll get torso you aint clutching the weapons in warzones" <--- that doesnt even make sense. I know it ties in with the next line but the wordplay in itself doesnt make sense both ways in the context of the first line. Second line, I like the idiom and the tie up of the torso wordplay but how in the fuck does one "Wreck" the ropes? A rope cant be wrecked. Poor choice of rhymes. And not to mention your punchline was a reach, i got the concept of the thick skull over heart/punisher attire but it was a straight forward concept which didnt have any relevant setups to it and neither did it have any relevant multies in the build up.


See you chose the Wrong Animal To Lead Down a Path like a TAMED PRIMATE OR LEOPARD I'm like Jigsaw. You couldn't "make it a step Grosser" all the GAMES I PLAY TOO MEASURED so when we "Tie One, Knees Behind Bars" it ain't a CAGED TAI PEI FRUIT EXPERT!! (Grocer, Taiwanese)

^^So you're calling yourself an animal and saying he chose to lead you down a path? That alone is a self diss/hyping him up. Yes the "Wrong animal" bit does make it a bit insulting but its vague as fuck. And how is a "Tamed primate" a wrong animal to lead down the path? I can understand a leopard but Primates are friendly animals. The jigsaw/playing games concept is played out and dated. Not to mention the Grosser bit didnt make sense both ways. "Couldnt make it a step grocer..." <--- WHAT THE FUCK DOES THAT MEAN? You clearly have no idea about wordplays so leave that shit alone and master the basics first. The multi is forced too "GAMES I PLAY TOO MEASURED" .. would you really say that in a normal conversation? The punchline was unghh. So you say when you "tie one, knees behind bars" <---- please tell me how that makes sense. Forced as fuck. And I know the fruit expert bit ties in with the grocer bit but the punchline itself has NO reference to a fruit expert which makes it sloppy and forced.

Imma get that heart THROBBING, HOLD YOUR HAT HIP-HIGH when you find that body. See he's Close to the "Edge" w/ each hit like Jesse SOBBING when WALTER AND FRING DIED I'll have bullets whirl through at Shodan in the "Spur" of the Moment you ain't WATCHING GOLDBERG AT RINGSIDE!!

The multi in the first line is so fucking forced. "THROBBING, HOLD YOUR HAT HIP HIGH" doesnt even sound natural or coherent. The wordplay in this was terrible too. Spur/Spear...they dont even sound the same. Spur has the same annunciation as Blur whereas Spear has the annunciation of Fear/Ear/Tears. This makes the whole bar garbage because the wordplay didnt tie up in the first place.


This dog wanna muscle up like GREYHOUNDS THAT BEEN FREE-RUN? I'll give you one swing, throw-in another Round, a-bout or w/e this ain't your local PLAYGROUNDS PROCEEDS STREET PUNK if you're on this Road to Greatness & you get Lifted Up, I'll Bring an End To That Roll like BREAKDOWNS BETWEEN SPEED BUMPS!?

^^The first line was complete filler that didnt tie in and wasnt creative either. "One swing, throw-in another Round, a-bout or w/e".....what the fuck did you just type? Did your dog just walk over your keyboard or did you pull random words outta your hat and posted them? Doesnt make sense at all. I get the references to the Playground analogy but how does that make sense? Smh aren't you English? Moving on..Speed bumps dont "lift you up". Your tires are still in contact with the ground and arent suspended in thin air. So that is a reach. And cringeworthy. Again, a sloppy/forced bar with no proper execution or a creative concept.

I'll Feed Your Noodle to the Dogs this ain't a LADY AND THE TRAMP SCENE One bomb, and your Loo-Is Down the Road like 'CEDES AT THE GRAND PRIX!! (Lewis)

^^ https://www.letsbeef.com/forums/showthread.php?t=161353

Lmao so this dude is supposed to be a threat? Dude is garbage. Like literally whack. Ass juice from a homeless person type bad. This will be an easy win in the LBA
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Unread 06-15-2017, 10:10 AM   #1
 
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Exclamation Nicholas a top tier? LMFAO What A Joke!

Lmao dude is garbage, here is his 16 vs Shodan in which he got ethered

if you take shots, you'll get "tore-so" you aint CLUTCHING THE WEAPONS IN WARZONES but go ahead "get it off your chest" like GULLIVER WRECKING THE SMALL ROPES and "choose your thick skull over your heart again" but you ain't The PUNISHER CHECKING HIS WARDROBE!!

^^Ok first of all, the tore-so wordplay sounds perfect annunciation wise but it doesnt make sense both ways grammatically. Isnt that the point of wordplay? "You'll get torso you aint clutching the weapons in warzones" <--- that doesnt even make sense. I know it ties in with the next line but the wordplay in itself doesnt make sense both ways in the context of the first line. Second line, I like the idiom and the tie up of the torso wordplay but how in the fuck does one "Wreck" the ropes? A rope cant be wrecked. Poor choice of rhymes. And not to mention your punchline was a reach, i got the concept of the thick skull over heart/punisher attire but it was a straight forward concept which didnt have any relevant setups to it and neither did it have any relevant multies in the build up.


See you chose the Wrong Animal To Lead Down a Path like a TAMED PRIMATE OR LEOPARD I'm like Jigsaw. You couldn't "make it a step Grosser" all the GAMES I PLAY TOO MEASURED so when we "Tie One, Knees Behind Bars" it ain't a CAGED TAI PEI FRUIT EXPERT!! (Grocer, Taiwanese)

^^So you're calling yourself an animal and saying he chose to lead you down a path? That alone is a self diss/hyping him up. Yes the "Wrong animal" bit does make it a bit insulting but its vague as fuck. And how is a "Tamed primate" a wrong animal to lead down the path? I can understand a leopard but Primates are friendly animals. The jigsaw/playing games concept is played out and dated. Not to mention the Grosser bit didnt make sense both ways. "Couldnt make it a step grocer..." <--- WHAT THE FUCK DOES THAT MEAN? You clearly have no idea about wordplays so leave that shit alone and master the basics first. The multi is forced too "GAMES I PLAY TOO MEASURED" .. would you really say that in a normal conversation? The punchline was unghh. So you say when you "tie one, knees behind bars" <---- please tell me how that makes sense. Forced as fuck. And I know the fruit expert bit ties in with the grocer bit but the punchline itself has NO reference to a fruit expert which makes it sloppy and forced.

Imma get that heart THROBBING, HOLD YOUR HAT HIP-HIGH when you find that body. See he's Close to the "Edge" w/ each hit like Jesse SOBBING when WALTER AND FRING DIED I'll have bullets whirl through at Shodan in the "Spur" of the Moment you ain't WATCHING GOLDBERG AT RINGSIDE!!

The multi in the first line is so fucking forced. "THROBBING, HOLD YOUR HAT HIP HIGH" doesnt even sound natural or coherent. The wordplay in this was terrible too. Spur/Spear...they dont even sound the same. Spur has the same annunciation as Blur whereas Spear has the annunciation of Fear/Ear/Tears. This makes the whole bar garbage because the wordplay didnt tie up in the first place.


This dog wanna muscle up like GREYHOUNDS THAT BEEN FREE-RUN? I'll give you one swing, throw-in another Round, a-bout or w/e this ain't your local PLAYGROUNDS PROCEEDS STREET PUNK if you're on this Road to Greatness & you get Lifted Up, I'll Bring an End To That Roll like BREAKDOWNS BETWEEN SPEED BUMPS!?

^^The first line was complete filler that didnt tie in and wasnt creative either. "One swing, throw-in another Round, a-bout or w/e".....what the fuck did you just type? Did your dog just walk over your keyboard or did you pull random words outta your hat and posted them? Doesnt make sense at all. I get the references to the Playground analogy but how does that make sense? Smh aren't you English? Moving on..Speed bumps dont "lift you up". Your tires are still in contact with the ground and arent suspended in thin air. So that is a reach. And cringeworthy. Again, a sloppy/forced bar with no proper execution or a creative concept.

I'll Feed Your Noodle to the Dogs this ain't a LADY AND THE TRAMP SCENE One bomb, and your Loo-Is Down the Road like 'CEDES AT THE GRAND PRIX!! (Lewis)

^^ https://www.letsbeef.com/forums/showthread.php?t=161353

Lmao so this dude is supposed to be a threat? Dude is garbage. Like literally whack. Ass juice from a homeless person type bad. This will be an easy win in the LBA
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Unread 06-15-2017, 06:19 PM
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Good breakdown. This is L.B text in a nutshell.
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Unread 06-16-2017, 08:46 AM
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@Nicholas why are you ducking this thread tho
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@Nicholas why are you ducking this thread tho
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@Nicholas why are you ducking this thread tho
I've seen these threads made about Daddio, Jason, Rupt and Dissizit.... I'm in good company, have at it.
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I've seen these threads made about Daddio, Jason, Rupt and Dissizit.... I'm in good company, have at it.
 
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Unread 06-16-2017, 09:13 AM
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I've seen these threads made about Daddio, Jason, Rupt and Dissizit.... I'm in good company, have at it.
nah only Dissizit.

Never seen daddio, jason and erupt

But yeah Dissizit no showed the scheme tourney and no showed vs Celsius

You ducked my text callout

Yes you are in good company indeed
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I've seen these threads made about Daddio, Jason, Rupt and Dissizit.... I'm in good company, have at it.
nah only Dissizit.

Never seen daddio, jason and erupt

But yeah Dissizit no showed the scheme tourney and no showed vs Celsius

You ducked my text callout

Yes you are in good company indeed
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