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Am I wrong?.
Slaughters An EMBARASSIN EMCEE, It's Funny How He Thinks "His Skill," can Fuck "With Real," He's DARING TO TEST ME! I ATTACK HER WITH MAD BLOWS, Too Many Times I've "Crossed Wacks," But Ur More *Off Track* Then RAPPERS WITH BAD FLOW! Too Get This Win I got the SKILLS INSIDE, But What Does This So Call "Vet Offer?" Bitch u'll *Get~Slaughtered,* Just Like how u KILLED UR PRIDE!! Dog u Really ELEVATED THE WACK WAY, Now watch him Send "In The Hoes,'' an He Think He's Good becuz He Got a *Win Against Oh's...* I Bet he CELEBRATED THAT DAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
YNS; Readability was somewhat better than the first verse but was lacking in areas. Wasn't feeling highlighting random multies. Punchlines, if you could call them that, were extremely simple & basic. Overall it was a poor battle verse. My advice to both would to try to incorporate metaphor's & punchlines. Both need work on there structure. Take this as a hate vote if you wish but im been real with you both so you both can improve.
YNS- seems to have caught feelings over the way I vote. People that know me knows i keep it '100. Do you agree or disagree with the way i have voted?. Im not doing this for my benefit, just wan't to know your opinion. I rated the verse 3.
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Am I wrong?.
Slaughters An EMBARASSIN EMCEE, It's Funny How He Thinks "His Skill," can Fuck "With Real," He's DARING TO TEST ME! I ATTACK HER WITH MAD BLOWS, Too Many Times I've "Crossed Wacks," But Ur More *Off Track* Then RAPPERS WITH BAD FLOW! Too Get This Win I got the SKILLS INSIDE, But What Does This So Call "Vet Offer?" Bitch u'll *Get~Slaughtered,* Just Like how u KILLED UR PRIDE!! Dog u Really ELEVATED THE WACK WAY, Now watch him Send "In The Hoes,'' an He Think He's Good becuz He Got a *Win Against Oh's...* I Bet he CELEBRATED THAT DAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
YNS; Readability was somewhat better than the first verse but was lacking in areas. Wasn't feeling highlighting random multies. Punchlines, if you could call them that, were extremely simple & basic. Overall it was a poor battle verse. My advice to both would to try to incorporate metaphor's & punchlines. Both need work on there structure. Take this as a hate vote if you wish but im been real with you both so you both can improve.
YNS- seems to have caught feelings over the way I vote. People that know me knows i keep it '100. Do you agree or disagree with the way i have voted?. Im not doing this for my benefit, just wan't to know your opinion. I rated the verse 3.
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08-03-2011, 03:12 PM
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I agree. read it this morning. slaughter wasn't even rhyming his first few bars. shit made no sense to me why he would cap when he did when capping is used soley to highlight rhyming words. battle was ass tbh.
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I agree. read it this morning. slaughter wasn't even rhyming his first few bars. shit made no sense to me why he would cap when he did when capping is used soley to highlight rhyming words. battle was ass tbh.
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08-03-2011, 03:12 PM
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if seen some 3 material, and i dunno thats a bit low maybe.... but yeah you do alwaaays keep it 100% ur just a tougher judge then most nohomo
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if seen some 3 material, and i dunno thats a bit low maybe.... but yeah you do alwaaays keep it 100% ur just a tougher judge then most nohomo
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08-03-2011, 03:15 PM
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Not to delve too deep into this but this is the first thing that caught my eye without even needing to look closely at it.
And this is just the first line.
Slaughters An EMBARASSIN EMCEE, It's Funny How He Thinks "His Skill," can Fuck "With Real," He's DARING TO TEST ME! I ATTACK HER WITH MAD BLOWS
Hows that happen?
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08-03-2011, 03:15 PM
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Not to delve too deep into this but this is the first thing that caught my eye without even needing to look closely at it.
And this is just the first line.
Slaughters An EMBARASSIN EMCEE, It's Funny How He Thinks "His Skill," can Fuck "With Real," He's DARING TO TEST ME! I ATTACK HER WITH MAD BLOWS
Hows that happen?
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4'ish-4.325.. Ive seen 3 work, & to be real this is along tha soulja boi lines..
Somebody drop tha ban-hammer on this hate-voter
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4'ish-4.325.. Ive seen 3 work, & to be real this is along tha soulja boi lines..
Somebody drop tha ban-hammer on this hate-voter
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@ Just, I would agree, It was a pretty terrible battle.
@ Final Word, The only reason im a tougher judge is by telling someone there dope and handing out 9's and 10's, there automatically going to think what there doing is working. When in reality, people are gassing them up.
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@ Just, I would agree, It was a pretty terrible battle.
@ Final Word, The only reason im a tougher judge is by telling someone there dope and handing out 9's and 10's, there automatically going to think what there doing is working. When in reality, people are gassing them up.
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yeah and i dig that, but we both could probably pull up some shit thats ALOT worse then that.. and with that being a 3.. what do you rate the other garbage?
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yeah and i dig that, but we both could probably pull up some shit thats ALOT worse then that.. and with that being a 3.. what do you rate the other garbage?
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lol @ GRiizEAT, my votes only seem like hate because I keep it '100. You need to question the people (Im_Ares & TheViper especially) for handing out 8's+.
@ Final, I gave the other dude a 2.
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lol @ GRiizEAT, my votes only seem like hate because I keep it '100. You need to question the people (Im_Ares & TheViper especially) for handing out 8's+.
@ Final, I gave the other dude a 2.
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Phew!! Glad i'm in this guy's Crew lol....I'd be catching 3's in my battles....emBARASSING EMCEE and DARING TO TEST ME rhymes though
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Phew!! Glad i'm in this guy's Crew lol....I'd be catching 3's in my battles....emBARASSING EMCEE and DARING TO TEST ME rhymes though
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