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Unread 10-11-2015, 10:13 PM
King Balor
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Jesus Baron, you've been everywhere bro. This was a dope read, probably the best I've seen on here so far but you're not a LB original so that isn't really saying anything about the Topical guys here. Wording was super smooth and I felt the rhyme scheme was just enough to keep a nice steady pace from beginning to end.
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Jesus Baron, you've been everywhere bro. This was a dope read, probably the best I've seen on here so far but you're not a LB original so that isn't really saying anything about the Topical guys here. Wording was super smooth and I felt the rhyme scheme was just enough to keep a nice steady pace from beginning to end.
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