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Unread 08-03-2014, 09:40 AM
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This was pretty close , but what I distinguished between the two verses is that one rhymed more consistently on point , which made the read enjoyable , and the fluidity fairly constant. Off my preference.

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This was pretty close , but what I distinguished between the two verses is that one rhymed more consistently on point , which made the read enjoyable , and the fluidity fairly constant. Off my preference.

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