Briefly, Writer #1's piece was emotionally captivating with smooth, impressive scheme-work and vivid imagery while Writer #2's verse was written in a more repetitive fashion and as a result of their scheme-work among other things, was much less impressive overall.
MVGT: Writer #1
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"Im an animal, scrap n youll get mauled n left w/ battle wounds from the jaws of an alpha wolf"
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