[ELOH STACKz]

ET: you had a solid storyline with a main protagonist (y'all remember English lit, Lol). You stayed true to the Topic throughout the rhyme. You painted a nice picture of dudes relationship history & even gave reasons as to why shit never worked out with his bitches. I like how your character kind of changed his tune at the end. From not wanting to get married to realizing he doesn't wanna be alone for the rest of his life. Your Multi-rhymes matched up we also, overall solid drop.

Dys: your story was more confusing & at points didn't relate to the topic. If I'm reading correctly, you jumped from the husband to his Wife within a few bars without explaining the transition. So I kinda had a hard time following who you were talking about. Your rhymes were solid, the format was more poetically sound than your opponents, but I feel he did a better job in the imagery department as well as staying on topic. I agree with M U G G Z

Vote: ET The Refugee

[ELOH STACKz]

ET: you had a solid storyline with a main protagonist (y'all remember English lit, Lol). You stayed true to the Topic throughout the rhyme. You painted a nice picture of dudes relationship history & even gave reasons as to why shit never worked out with his bitches. I like how your character kind of changed his tune at the end. From not wanting to get married to realizing he doesn't wanna be alone for the rest of his life. Your Multi-rhymes matched up we also, overall solid drop.

Dys: your story was more confusing & at points didn't relate to the topic. If I'm reading correctly, you jumped from the husband to his Wife within a few bars without explaining the transition. So I kinda had a hard time following who you were talking about. Your rhymes were solid, the format was more poetically sound than your opponents, but I feel he did a better job in the imagery department as well as staying on topic. I agree with M U G G Z

Vote: ET The Refugee