Dissizit: Your piece was interesting. Like EtH, I didn't like the Illuminati kind of direction but you did sort of add a twist to it. The metaphors were very nice. The final meaning to the piece was good and the "adore a door" shit was nice.
Streetz Da Hood: You took a very unoriginal and predictable route. Like EtH said, you didn't have much to the story except a lot of imagery of sadness then revealing she was being molested even though that was pretty obvious the whole piece. It wasn't a bad piece; it just wasn't good.
OVERALL: Dissizit gets my vote because of better originality and his metaphors were really dope.
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