Writer 8 - you were a bit boring and i felt you could of shown a lot more lyricism within your verse.. I wasnt really feeling the story as well, it should of had a few twist to it or something more then just weed..
Writer 9 - I'm not much of a topical person but i had somewhat of the same idea as you writer 9.. My would have been strictly porn though.. I felt your stroy telling was good and the flow to your verse was nice and your multies helped with your verse a lot..
Vote: Writer 9
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