Rhyming Scheme/Flow- i liked Liz's flow n think he did a bit better here
Vocabulary- Liz
Topic/Meaning- Dono..
Storytelling/Progression- Dono..
Emotion- Dono
Imagery- Dono
Poetic Techniques- Liz
Ending- Dono
My vote goes to Dono.. Liz has a style of writing that i dont really get and imo Dono was more on topic and had a better verse here. There were some spots like flow n vocab that Liz got.. imo but my votes in.
