Voting Rubix
Rhyming Scheme/Flow: TIE one had choppy flow, the other had a simple rhyme scheme.
Vocabulary: TIE both were kinda boring with there usage of the english language.
Topic/Meaning: Erupt had a much better feel for the topic, IMO.
Storytelling/Progression: Erupt stayed much more consistant skill level wise & plot wise.
Emotion: Fiji had a much better feel overall. Slightly better wording in some places made a difference.
Imagery: TIE both got a pretty good picture of the scene. Good work on this from both sides..to close.
Poetic Techniques: Erupt had much better metaphors & described the entire scenery in a poetic manner.
Ending: Erupt was much more exciting throughout the final stanzas..
MVGT - Erupt. He exzibited much better skills then Fiji in this one. Although it was close, Erupt managed to clutch most of the categories...Good battle guys.