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Unread 03-13-2012, 11:11 PM
NelSyn
Join Date: Nov 2010
Posts: 647
Mentioned: 88 Post(s)
Tagged: 4 Thread(s)
Estimated Skill in Text: 5.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 5.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 5.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 5.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 5.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 5.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 6.93/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 6.93/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 6.93/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 6.93/10 stars
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44 Won / 24 Lost
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Rhyming Scheme/Flow - V3NUMB he had a much smoother read, & a better rhyming structure..
Vocabulary - FAME a much broader & more unique choices of words.
Topic/Meaning - V3NUMB - It honestly seemed like V3NUMB better potrayed the pic.
Storytelling/Progression - V3NUMB - He did a better job at portraying the story creatively
Emotion - V3NUMB - A stronger concept for the emotion to build
Imagery - FAME - Honestly put a clearer image in my head..
Poetic Techniques TIE - Neither really had any.
Ending FAME - Less traditional & much more creative

MVGT: V3numb because of his emotional concepts & a lot more complex then his opponant
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Unread 03-13-2012, 11:11 PM   #13
 
NelSyn
Estimated Skill in Text: 5.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 5.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 5.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 5.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 5.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 5.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 6.93/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 6.93/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 6.93/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 6.93/10 stars
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44 Won / 24 Lost
 
Join Date: Nov 2010
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Posts: 647
Mentioned: 88 Post(s)
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Rhyming Scheme/Flow - V3NUMB he had a much smoother read, & a better rhyming structure..
Vocabulary - FAME a much broader & more unique choices of words.
Topic/Meaning - V3NUMB - It honestly seemed like V3NUMB better potrayed the pic.
Storytelling/Progression - V3NUMB - He did a better job at portraying the story creatively
Emotion - V3NUMB - A stronger concept for the emotion to build
Imagery - FAME - Honestly put a clearer image in my head..
Poetic Techniques TIE - Neither really had any.
Ending FAME - Less traditional & much more creative

MVGT: V3numb because of his emotional concepts & a lot more complex then his opponant
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