Rhyming Scheme/Flow: Close, but V3numb had a little more flow imo.
Vocabulary: Neither went out of the box, but V3 had more grammatical errors and words that were either misspelled or just used incorrectly... so Imma say FAME in this one.
Topic/Meaning: Another close one, Imo FAME had a clearer representation of the pic, as odd of an angle as it was that he decided to take.
Storytelling/Progression: Neither really showed any storytelling or much progression. Tie
Emotion: If I had to pick one I'd say V3numb, the murderous emotion is slightly stronger than humor as far as a topical goes.
Imagery: FAME actually painted more pictures visually IMO.
Poetic Techniques: Tied at zero.
Ending: FAME.
Overall FAME gets my vote.
V3numb had what might be a more traditional topical drop, but I think even he knows he rushed it a little too much and it lacked the elements needed for the W. If he would have taken a little more time and incorporated a clearer story and more poetic techniques I'd say he would have swept it with as odd of an angle FAME decided to take.
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