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Unread 10-12-2011, 08:16 PM
Xander
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Rhyming Scheme/Flow - Intricate. Both started slow but got alot better as they progressed tho.
Vocabulary - Phenom, a pretty easy choice...just, better
Topic/Meaning - Tied...fucking awesome from both sides.
Storytelling/Progression - Phenom - His started off a bit slower, but ended up getting alot better by the middle.
Emotion - Intricate ... both were good, emotion wise..and all though Phenom showed better story telling techniques, I felt Intricate's more.
Imagery - Intricate .. more emotion usually equals better / more imagery. I swearI saw the story as I was reading it. Lol.
Poetic Techniques - Phenom, showed alot better rhyming skills then his opponent.
Ending - Phenom, like I said, he started off slower, but then by the end did get alot better.

MVGT - Phenom ... close as a motherfucker. Only slight differences won this, honestly a great battle.
Unread 10-12-2011, 08:16 PM   #6
 
Xander
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Estimated Skill in Text: 0/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 0/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 0/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 0/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 0/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 0/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 0/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.63/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.63/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.63/10 stars
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37 Won / 11 Lost
 
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Rhyming Scheme/Flow - Intricate. Both started slow but got alot better as they progressed tho.
Vocabulary - Phenom, a pretty easy choice...just, better
Topic/Meaning - Tied...fucking awesome from both sides.
Storytelling/Progression - Phenom - His started off a bit slower, but ended up getting alot better by the middle.
Emotion - Intricate ... both were good, emotion wise..and all though Phenom showed better story telling techniques, I felt Intricate's more.
Imagery - Intricate .. more emotion usually equals better / more imagery. I swearI saw the story as I was reading it. Lol.
Poetic Techniques - Phenom, showed alot better rhyming skills then his opponent.
Ending - Phenom, like I said, he started off slower, but then by the end did get alot better.

MVGT - Phenom ... close as a motherfucker. Only slight differences won this, honestly a great battle.
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