Rhyming Scheme/Flow - Dos - Slighty. I felt his flowed all the way through with no flaws in the flow.
Vocabulary - Tie - Neither really outshined the other in this cat
Topic/Meaning - Dos - Another close one here, I felt that dos was more consistant with his topic relating towards the picture, where as, xander, went off with the other thing in certain parts.
Storytelling/Progression - Dos - Dosage storyline progressed from beginning to end, felt xander hopped around a bit and didn't have a real start or closing finish.
Emotion - Dos - Slighty though. Felt his emotion shined a bit more from his consistancy to stay on the topic
Imagery - Xander - Barely. Liked some of the details he used to describe the things going on.
Poetic Techniques - Tie - Like the flow cat, neither really outshined the other by too much
Ending - Dos - He put a real close to the end, and you knew his verse was over.
Dos GMV
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