Rhyming Scheme/Flow-i think both were good here, it was close in this cata, so this is a tie
Vocabulary- phe got this cata, md didnt have many things that stood out.
Topic/Meaning- imma go with phe on this one also....i feel he was closer to the topic meaning. thoughh i liked MD's angle of it.
Storytelling/Progression-this was a tie...both told nice storys...
Emotion- this was a tie also...both showed alot of emotion here....
Imagery- this also was a tie....i got good images from both emotional aspects.
Poetic Techniques- i feel phe takes this cata, his was more poetic imo...
Ending- i feel like MD's ending was ehhh, phes ending was ok, so tie
mvgt PHENOM
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