Rhyming Scheme/Flow- for me it was rocky for both... tie
Vocabulary- this ones down the middle as well. tie
Topic/Meaning- i felt that Phe kinda kept wit the topic better. barely took
Storytelling/Progression-Mike Moved his Story more clearly
Emotion- Phe
Imagery- Mike... i saw the club better then i did the surgical room
Poetic Techniques- Mike... The metaphor of industry, hip hop, karma, etc. really struck
Ending- Mike... Phe's was a little predictable. Close tho.
Vote: Mike, His read was more enjoyable. good looks to both tho. nice one here.
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