Rhyming Scheme/Flow
Vocabulary- Prose, good shit
Topic/Meaning- Prose, really enjoyed your meaning. Speech didn't stick to the topic
Storytelling/Progression- prose, clear beginning and ending, progressed nicely
Emotion- prose, easily. really thought out, your verse was real
Imagery- about the same level, but Prose because of the depth
Poetic Techniques- Speech had nice flow, but in a battle sense.. Prose verse didn't always rhyme, gunna have to give that to speech, but for the wrong reasons
Ending- prose, cliche ending with the beep, but the lead up to that was nice
Overall- Prose i really enjoyed reading your verse, it was nicely thought out with a lot of emotion and it fitted with the topic. Speechless i think you got the wrong idea with this round. But prose nice work keep it up
Vote- Deep Prose
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