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#5 06-23-2014, 11:57 PM

I liked both of these a lot. Briefly, I felt like Writer 9 had some forced multis, acting as a hinderence to his verse. Writer 24 was much more smooth, in terms of multi usage. I felt both stories were on the same level story wise (maybe verse 9 a tad bit more creative), however, Writer 24 was much more lucid. Nice storytelling teamed up with smoother flow made verse 24 a more engaging read.

FVGBNOH8- Writer 24

06-23-2014, 11:57 PM

I liked both of these a lot. Briefly, I felt like Writer 9 had some forced multis, acting as a hinderence to his verse. Writer 24 was much more smooth, in terms of multi usage. I felt both stories were on the same level story wise (maybe verse 9 a tad bit more creative), however, Writer 24 was much more lucid. Nice storytelling teamed up with smoother flow made verse 24 a more engaging read.

FVGBNOH8- Writer 24

06-23-2014, 11:57 PM	#5
Dean Guest Voted: 0 audio / 0 text Posts: n/a Mentioned: Post(s) Tagged: Thread(s)	I liked both of these a lot. Briefly, I felt like Writer 9 had some forced multis, acting as a hinderence to his verse. Writer 24 was much more smooth, in terms of multi usage. I felt both stories were on the same level story wise (maybe verse 9 a tad bit more creative), however, Writer 24 was much more lucid. Nice storytelling teamed up with smoother flow made verse 24 a more engaging read. FVGBNOH8- Writer 24 Last edited by Dean; 06-24-2014 at 12:02 AM.